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On Mars In Mars

On Mars In Mars Volcano hollowed sound, echoes in Olympus Mons Thin atmosphere cratered in ancient crevasses Storms last three hundred years or more Etch ancient lines red iron oxidation Rocks move from one place to another As the only life on Mars Mouths of rivers dry and scarred above Love is rare. No air. Ground tells a story To be told but somewhat old Holes fill with water gray and heavy underneath Keep secrets of the planet Inside and on the surface Of things we still can’t understand 1. (*Olympus Mons is a very large shield volcano on the planet Mars. By one measure, it has a height of nearly 25 km (16 mi). Olympus Mons stands almost three times as tall as Mount Everest's height above sea level) Created on 7/17/15 for “Subject Mars” Poetry Contest sponsored by: Joe Maverick

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Date: 7/27/2015 1:27:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Earl ! Brilliant work! Love the notes!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 7/27/2015 10:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Sharma. Congratulations to you too on your truly great entry and great win in this contest. Earl
Date: 7/26/2015 11:58:00 PM
Nice descriptive write, Earl, and makes on wonder why we'd want to colonise it, apart from for exploiting resources. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:06:00 PM
EARL Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 7/27/2015 10:27:00 AM
Hi SKAT, Thank you. Mars no longer feels like a distant world. The more we learn about it the closer it gets. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 7/26/2015 4:24:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thanks again. I enjoyed your entry as well. Congrats. on your excellent win. Take care. Earl
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:25:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Earl:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/17/2015 8:02:00 AM
vivid descriptive write Earl good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 7/17/2015 9:56:00 AM
Hi Jan, Happy Friday. Thank you for your encouragement. Mars is always a fun topic of interest to write about. Have a great week end. Earl

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