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The Bolts of Balthakk Premiere Contest Winner

Like many heroes of mysterious Marvel Comics, Doctor Stephen Vincent Strange is a bolt of magic mix; Spells of supernatural kinds he works, abundantly, Crimsons, crystals, ice, rings, chains - in constant redundancy...! Pile of pure pulverization and annihilation, The Bolts of Balthakk has become eternal damnation; On any stuff - solid or liquid - the bolt does explode, Like iron-oxidation, all powers it does corrode...! Bounds, rebounds, rings, winks, blows, boomerangs at its master's hands, Swishes, swooshes; whizzes, whooshes like winds in desert sands; None in heaven or hell could ever its gravity hold, Like swift, sly electric current it does its force unfold...! Is it terrible torch of fire? Or lake of lava? Is it hydro-nitrogen bomb resembling baklava? From hands of Doctor Strange, like gold dust they serenely fly, Clapping, crashing, flashing, dazzling, booming, zooming they spry...! Doctor Strange manipulates these bolts like liquid plasma, For him, a magic-surgeon, it's mere mental miasma; An awesome third eye adorns the forehead of Doctor Strange, For mesmerized kids, these are, delightful amusement-range...! 30 August 2022 Doctor Strange Spells Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Date: 9/5/2022 10:35:00 AM
Very exciting poem! You brought Dr. Strange spells to life! Well done. Glad I could give you the trophy!!!
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Date: 9/5/2022 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win with this action packed thrilling write :) ps
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Date: 9/5/2022 3:10:00 AM
You have done an awesome job with this one, well researched and excellently penned, congrats on your 1st place win, way to go Chris :)
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Date: 9/5/2022 2:01:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... very informatively penned in your awesome rhyming acumen. God bless you
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Date: 9/4/2022 3:55:00 PM
You've captured Dr Strange in all of his magical mystery. The alliteration is top notch too (ie "bounds, rebounds...blows, boomerangs.."). Congratulations on such a fine win! Brian
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Date: 8/30/2022 10:22:00 AM
Magical Chris! We are swept up into this world of fantasy through your words. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings for you. This made me smile and escorted me back into my childhood place of heroes and villains, quests and world saving superheroes! Blessings. Thanks for letting me be a little kid again with your playful poem!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/4/2022 10:04:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God bless you!

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