Best Makeover Poems

Still Weeping

Original poem - Verse - June 8, 2013

Many came with flowers,
rainbows of roses and lilies,
solemn people came and went.

And then it was quiet,
the white snow fell upon me,
as I lay waiting in my eternal peace.

In a low voice father spoke,
with tears so fondly all...

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You say I need a makeover,
that I'm not the man I could be
You say I'm too rough around the edges,
a little smoothing out would polish me
To you, I'm too straight ghetto;
I got the right mind,
just tilted a little wrong
Instead of saying: "I'm leaving,"
I say, "I...

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Old Poem: Toes Of Rain ...4/6/2014

August spills rains
with tapped grains, like
pearl veins on roofs

Drenched in soft hue,
toes play new songs
of blue night’s croons

~than-bauk form~ 

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Makeover: Flavor Of Rain  4/5/2015


Just now, the saline flavor of rain
crawls on my cheeks , drips on  hands
then sprawls...

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On Top Of A Mountain 
              2

stroll down the forest trail
to the edge and inhale
at the sight overlooking perfect nature
held together and prevail

stand by the site of trees and bushes
with lichen hanging...

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You say I need a makeover,
that I'm not the man I could be
You say I'm too rough around the edges,
a little smoothing out would polish me
To you, I'm too straight ghetto;
I got the right mind,
just tilted a little wrong
Instead of saying I'm leaving,
I say I...

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Salons and beauticians carve beauty
Today beauty and makeup are considered as duty
What implies these beautiful faces?
Reality and honesty in some cases
Other hide ugliness and show they are fruity
Is it fair or a cruelty?
For ourselves a complete dishonesty
As our beauty old age surely displaces
Really? The Makeover
To...

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He stole a new dress from a shop
And wig that was like an old mop,
As his make up was bad,
He resembled the mad -
This ‘miss’ was a bit of a flop.

For Susan's contest...

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A
grace gift
free to be-
forgiveness by
a saviour,gives agape to me....

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The Makeover- Shots

You take one shot
And I miss you
I know you're gone
But I still wanna kiss you

You've made yourself a monster
Both you and me you scar
Your eyes are dimly lit
But behind shines who you are

Who you used to be

The part that misses me

(Pre Edit: January...

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THE MAKEOVER


The house he occupies still breathes
Though haggard, it's not trashed
He and his house seemed outcast to many
Once a gentle part of the landscape
Those features fair, soon became gaunt and sallow
He was ravaged by his ravenous hunger for opiates
By degrees, his hearing, his sight
His sense...

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BLOOD LUST  06/25/2013


What sinister secrets
lurk within my mind,
What raging storms
grip my heart,
What malicious maelstroms
swirl in my eyes,
What demonic forces
torment my soul...
You don't wanna know!

It will only entice you
in its dreadful dragnet
And drag you through
an undead necropolis.

I thirst for the blood
And subsist on the
life essence...

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moonlit shadows springs
   eternal flame loves desire
   unquenched forever

   3/ 4/ 2015.      Haiku.

   Springtimes moon shadows dreams inspire.
   Eternal flight flames loves desire.
   Unquenched divine forever bright.
 ...

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Love justice




Those old memories are still new,
My love, he was one of the very few,
It occurred to us at the very first sight,
a challenge to prove who was more bright,

He lost to me and I lost to him,
Emotions were flowing out of the brim,
He left...

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As 
Life
Shows the
Results from
Decisions taken
Surge a new opportunity 
To begin a new story to tell in the future
Before time slips from your hands, without striving all the pending goals of your bucket list








Example For Second Chance Poetry Contest
September 5, 2016...

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innocence-
comes in two long blonde braids
dissapears- 
with a haircut...

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