George Seal Poet Rhyme

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moonlit shadows springs
   eternal flame loves desire
   unquenched forever

   3/ 4/ 2015.      Haiku.

   Springtimes moon shadows dreams inspire.
   Eternal flight flames loves desire.
   Unquenched divine forever bright.
   Starlight enchants, beams with delight.

   3/ 7/ 2015.     Rhyme.

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Robert Lindley April 19, 2015 at 2:08 PM Sorry that I am so late on the congrats, just recently found out the contest was finalized.. Big congrats on your win!!

Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 5:36 PM George, congratulations on your awesome win. Luv LINDA

Eve Roper March 25, 2015 at 8:51 PM How beautiful, they both are wonderful. Good luck in the contest, a7 blessings eve George Seal March 27, 2015 at 1:41 PM Hi Eve, thankyou for sending me your best wishes and i appreciate your nice comments about my poem. Cheers George.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis March 9, 2015 at 8:22 AM George, I find haiku teaches condensation of thought; and yours delights me with soft warmth. George Seal March 9, 2015 at 10:08 AM Hi Iris,thankyou so much fot the beautiful take on the haiku.I do appreciate thoughtfulness.Cheers George.