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Failed Makeover

He stole a new dress from a shop And wig that was like an old mop, As his make up was bad, He resembled the mad - This ‘miss’ was a bit of a flop. For Susan's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/17/2012 9:31:00 AM
I am still laughing from the last one.
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Date: 6/8/2012 2:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, liked it first time xx
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Date: 6/7/2012 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Susan's "Nailed or Failed"contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2012 6:45:00 PM
JACK, Congratulations with your wonderful win, In SUSAN'S contest. take care ;-) ~ Always PD
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Date: 6/3/2012 12:05:00 PM
Witty write Jack, love it! :) lfde Wilma
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Date: 6/2/2012 4:02:00 PM
You sure have the limerick beat down GOOD. A cute one from you.
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Date: 6/2/2012 2:16:00 PM
I haven't checked out this contest but this one reads like a winner...Good luck..Thanks for stopping by and reading my new ones..Sara
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Date: 6/2/2012 1:33:00 PM
oh yes this is still making me laugh well done Jack xx
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Date: 6/2/2012 1:22:00 PM
hahaha hilarious <3
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Date: 6/2/2012 11:06:00 AM
Ha! I like it! Hope you do well...Tanya
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