Best Disobedient Poems


Nafarmaan Nakhalf Baitay Ka Noha-- Elegy of a Disobedient and Evil Son

BeAdab gustakh jab aulad ho jaye
Chain sukh maa'n baap ka barbaad ho jaye

Cheen le budbakht jo walid ka sarmaya
Jeete jee kion baap na barbad ho jae

Aasteen ka saamp that beta nhi the woh
Maut ae usko woh barbad ho jae

Baap kee jo he raza Allah kee bhi he
Aashna is qaul se aulad ho jae

Maa'n ke hee pairoan talay jannat ko kar talash
Rah se bhatka jo too barbaad ho jae

Beta boorhay baap ka baazu he kehlata
Beta ye na samjhay toh barbaad ho jae

Nek o taabaydar ho aulad to wallah
Walideen ka dil khushi se shaad ho jae

Kia karein woh waladeen jab nakhalaf beta
Mayel e jaur o situm eejaad ho jae

Qibla o Ka'aba kuch kumtar nhi maa'n baap
Kaash hurmat aashna aulaad ho jae

Deen o dunya chin gaee naKhalf betay se
Baap per jo mayel e bedaad ho jae

Tu ne mera dil dukhaya to he mere lal
Hashr tak tu unsuni faryaad ho jae

Kion na ho jae pidar phir zinda dar-goar
Jab pisar badbakht hee sayyad ho jae

Premium Member Mama Don T Cry Over Me a Disobedient Child---

MAMA DON T CRY OVER ME A DISOBEDIENT CHILD---

Mama don't cry
Wipe these tears from your eyes
I'm your child
Yes, I was born in sin
You and daddy brought me here

And I've tried
to be good as I should
But this, these choices I find
Are to hard and I sometimes pick the wrong ones

Oh, na na na na la la
My, my, my God please help me
AS I find this test
I realize that I've been blessed
And I must confess
That I've fail these tests mama I'm so sorry

Now, dry them eyes
Come here allow me to hold you
I am so sorry, too will you and God forgive me
Oh, as I choose to redeem myself
Turn around and walk the right direction
Cause mama I wanna make it (here on this ole world) and go to heaven 
Mama please forgive me for what I've done
Stop crying I'm your only child
And I wanna be here a while with your love, with your peace
Believe me when I say, my old ways are deceased

Mama don't cry
Wipe these tears from your eyes
I'm your child
Yes, I was born in sin
You and daddy brought me here

And I've tried
to be good as I should
But this, these choices I find
Are to hard and I sometimes pick the wrong ones


Oh, na na na na la la
My, my, my God please help me
AS I find this test
I realize that I've been blessed
And I must confess
That I've fail these tests mama I'm so sorry, mom!
I am a disobedeine child whom made her mother cry
Please mama forgive me my wrongs I've done
Hush now stop this crying I'll do better I will try


12/5/18
Written words & arranged music by
 James Edward Lee Sr. ©2018  &  The Corinthian®

Premium Member Naughty Johnny

Naughty Johnny's behavior still shocks us
When we try to correct him he mocks us
"My rude behavior
I greatly savor
Just for you, I'll become more obnoxious!"




1/8/2023

Image credit: Wild Child by Jason V from Getty Images Signature via Canva Pro

"Obnoxious" means extremely unpleasant, offensive, or distasteful behavior. What can parents do to address obnoxious behavior in their children?
© Mark Toney  Create an image from this poem.


A Disobedient Conscious

Questioning the darkest hour,
Forgetting the corruptive power.
Seen only at the bottom of the sea,
or in the next galaxy.

Don't know where to turn,
Sensing your stomach burn.
Your conscious doesn't want to obey.
Will you stay or die?
A fountain of tears to cry,
But no goodbye.

The maze
A secret gaze
Transformation phase
All take days
To forget about,
And to remember,
When it's oblivious.

Premium Member A Disobedient Prophet Part Ii

Another prophet living near the town of Bethel
was enlightened of the events by his sons quite well.
This man determined this stranger as someone to know.
He then asked his sons, “On which road did this prophet go?”
After the sons told him, he said, “Saddle my donkey.”
The Bethel prophet then embarked on a short journey
until he encountered the man from Judah to see.
The prophet from Judah rested under an oak tree.
When asked if he were the man, he replied, “I am he”
The man from Bethel said, “Won’t you please come home with me?
I am also a prophet.  An angel came to be
a messenger to instruct to take you home with me.
When we arrive there, we shall eat, drink, and be merry.”
However, this old prophet’s words were mendacity.

When seated at the table, the Lord God then conveyed
words to the Judah prophet because he disobeyed:
“You have not followed my orders in this time you roam.
Therefore, you shall not live long enough to return home.”
The old prophet and his sons helped the man on his way.
However, the Judah man did not get far that day.
As the young prophet journeyed on his way to Zion,
he would be confronted and murdered by a lion.
Passersby on the road then would be able to see
the body of the dead prophet next to the donkey.
Word came to the old prophet and his sons in Bethel.
He and his sons traveled to where the body would dwell.
They brought the body back to be buried in the land
of the Bethel prophet, who would then make this demand:
After I die, bury my remains next to this man.
He was true to the Lord God as one possibly can.
As prophets are, it will be hard to find another.
Therefore, I consider this prophet as my brother.

From the First Book of Kings in the Old Testament

Premium Member Disobedient Naked In the Garden-

~And God said we are his children God said where are his children we were naked alone in the garden all things are ours we raised the lands I named everything I am Earth king while in the garden the father told us and could eat of anything but of a certain fruit bearing tree we were not allowed to eat though there we see for the first obedience
No father said if we eat there just so the fruit we bear of this that we would eat we would die life short we would die misfortune as adult eat of this fruit Lucifer denounce not named Satan the devil or the smooth wicked serpent he beguiled God's daughter and persuaded her to falter he whispered you will not surely die for if you eat from God's fruit you be absolute just as wise and all knowing is he so in my non infinite wisdom I disobeyed and I listened to the untruth and did eat upset fruit and when my husband came I tricked and then treated him and he also did eat of the fruit upon his attrition is biting beating of the fruit we didn't listen we were naked alone in the garden all things are ours we raised the lands I named everything I am no longer King for a disobeyed Our Father and now...we were naked alone in the garden this is when we die before we were disobedient and we hid/b>

Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2022
2/21/22


Premium Member Naked and Disobedient- What

Where am I and why am I in the still;
Standing naked unaware that I am even here;
The man next to me said if I do I’ll be as God;
That’s not how He (God) told us though;

So I’d listened to the stranger;
As he spit-out his lies;
I believed what he was selling and to my surprise
I was relentless in believing his untrue his lies

So when my Father came back;
He as us where we had been
Naked and ashamed He calls out our name;

He ask, He said 
Why???
Who told you were naked and why you disobey me;

4/4/2022
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2022©

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