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Best Detriments Poems


Whisper
(A Collaborated Poem with Liam McDaid and myself)

I hear a whisper…

In my dream last night, you've found another woman to hold
In your lonely nights, she becomes your sanctuary and desire
Turning your head away from an eastern promise
The whisper soon becomes a deafening silence too much...

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Categories: detriments, betrayal, hope, imagery,
Form: Free verse
The Apartment
Bed

Shakes and slumber alike
Float upon me
Wet emotion
Soaks through and stains
For her smiles
And his furrowed brow
Imprint
The laughter and pain

Mirror

Me, the shine and prism
Of her hatred
Endless hours of
Not good enough
And his reassurance
Of loveliness
That will never
Be understood

Carpet

Pounding thrashing
Of their two loves
Upon me at two am
Smiling after the
Sound of...

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Categories: detriments, confusion, devotion, friendship, sad,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member A Sonnet In the Wind
A musical wind blows at my door,
Low frequency soft soothing tone,
Euphony that mesmerises down the floor,
A musical wind blows at my door.

I am at peace with my soul,
Alpine harmonious delightful tone,
Enchantment that lives down the floor,
A musical wind blows at my door.

The wind blows swift...

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Categories: detriments, wind,
Form: Sonnet

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Increments
A thousand myriad voices           scattered on the wind
decry the human suffering questions will it end
tents in desert dustbowls        waiting upon the rain
lives molded in emptiness   ...

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Categories: detriments, conflict, environment, pain, pollution,
Form: Verse
Now, Palatine
the odor is brown
home wreaks of it
its emote 
sullen; somber

detriments
heavy waste
pervades...

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Categories: detriments, dark,
Form: Personification
Perfections1
In the very first start it sounded sweet.
Cool! cool! it didn't went every day,
events unfolded as we bridged time across.
I saw it came to a perfection but was it......
Now the tides have changed,
The pretty, beautiful, and came a price
One which an angel couldn't have.
Hairs stood...

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Categories: detriments, metaphor,
Form: Free verse



Premium Member PRAISE BE TO GOD WHO VALUES THE PRAYERS OF THE SAINTS
December 27 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on Revelation 8-10

Key Verse – Revelation 8:4 And the smoke of the incense, which came with the prayers of the saints, ascended up before God out of the angel's hand.

PRAISE BE TO GOD WHO VALUES 
THE PRAYERS...

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Categories: detriments, bible, blessing, christian, faith,
Form: Alliteration
Premium Member My God, Thank You For Pondering All My Goings
June 12 Scripture Meditations Based on Proverbs 5

Key Verse – Proverbs 5:21 For the ways of man are before the eyes of the LORD, and he pondereth all his goings.   

MY GOD, THANK YOU FOR PONDERING ALL MY GOINGS

Thank You for pondering all...

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Categories: detriments, blessing, christian, faith, god,
Form: Rhyme
Physiology
Relational,
Situational.

Rate aware,
Said affair. 

Increments,
Detriments.

Free choice,
My voice.

At the gym,
Inside vim.

Sim ready.
Foot steady....

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Categories: detriments, atheist, body, science,
Form: Couplet
Premium Member Letter To Death
Pray, what is your purpose, Death?
Carrying souls to their fated dues,
Via your messengers, beings so vile and so ugly
That the eyes hurt simply by looking at them!

Are you part of God's team?
Acting on His orders, reaping souls from the mundane
Like we reap grapes from vineyards?
Or...

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Categories: detriments, death, life, sorrow,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Grow In Grace
Grow*

in grace

with your faith

trusting the Lord

upon Scriptures’ truth

midst detriments and doubts

serving God by His power.

Abide in His will so wondrous

spreading the Gospel of salvation

exalting the omnipotent Saviour.

*2Peter 3:18 But grow in grace, and in the knowledge of our Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ. To him...

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Categories: detriments, bible, faith, god, inspirational,
Form: Etheree
Premium Member My God, Thank You For Giving Me Wisdom
June 9 Scripture Meditations Based on Proverbs 2

Key Verse – Proverbs 2:6 For the LORD giveth wisdom: out of his mouth cometh knowledge and understanding.     

MY GOD, THANK YOU FOR GIVING ME WISDOM

Thank You for giving me wisdom thru Your Word
Allowing...

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Categories: detriments, blessing, christian, faith, god,
Form: Rhyme
For the Holy Spirit Is In Me
my aura is filled with the Holy Spirit-
resonating in my soul ~ i shan’t fear it

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

i rest my weary head with a sound mind,
for i am becoming a woman who seeks peace-
there’s thrice the balance in my heart,
as i tarry toward the threshold of love

there...

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© Lu Loo  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: detriments, god, love,
Form: Verse
Battlefield Love
A love that secures pain is worthless.
A love to which any pain is a part,
Will destroy so much of a life,
Life is too precious to struggle,
With installments of turmoil,
Destruction between two will end.
Torture of the soul comes from,
Battles with physical detriments,
Has no true love at...

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Categories: detriments, confusion, daughter, sad, wifepain,
Form: Free verse
Tendencies
My self-destructive tendencies
are finally catching up with me
The sleepless nights
and endless days,
all lost within an exhausted haze,
and all are making me slowly fade away
I can feel my strength dissipating
Right now everything is just too frustrating
as I feel my health slowly slipping into disease
When does life...

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© Daron Long  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: detriments, confusion, death, health, introspection,
Form: Lyric

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