Home » Poems » Ako Henshaw » Perfections1

Perfections1

In the very first start it sounded sweet. Cool! cool! it didn't went every day, events unfolded as we bridged time across. I saw it came to a perfection but was it...... Now the tides have changed, The pretty, beautiful, and came a price One which an angel couldn't have. Hairs stood at ends waking every day.... See the same face at dull lights. Kiss lips of a kind through time bedeviled me.... Waters parade the bridges at my detriments so it's i call marriage in time at the very fist start 'twas sweet but a contempt view go for perfection and pray for redemption.....

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Skat A

Date: 8/1/2013 11:21:00 PM

it is awesome Ako,... LOVE ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2013 8:39:00 AM

Ako, , congratulations... with your sweet win... luv.. Linda

Ako Henshaw
Date: 7/30/2013 9:40:00 AM

H,i Linda thanks for everything and I hope to do better next time............Thanks again >>>>>Henshaw<<<<<<

Len Gasun

Date: 7/20/2013 11:37:00 PM

This is a very beautiful poem my dear friend, Ako,. I enjoyed reading it this morning and i so love it especially the ending. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by on my poem leaving me an inspiring comments. More power to you & have a blessed wkend! love and hugs, Leonora

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/20/2013 1:47:00 PM

Hello Ako, I am female. and thank you for the comment on my poem. It was a nice collaboration with the poet. Tim, he's a nice fellow poet... hugs your way, please post another poem... LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2013 7:59:00 PM

Hi Ako, I love the go for it thought. Kiss lips of a kind through time bedeviled me... love that line and imagery... XOX~ LINDA