Best Broad Shouldered Poems


Metaphoric Richness

He smiles at me.
As though the weight
Of psychedelic visions
Were insubstantial
And inconsequential;
A trivial thing.

Broad-shouldered emotions
Mushroom through 
Organic momentum
To greet my pain,
A throbbing haze
That is my post-script.

Narcotic serenity
Wraps around my brain,
Slurring everything
In my tilt-a-whirl scene,
Until the funhouse
Sweeps me away.

I feel myself shrinking
Like Alice In Wonderland,
But I am not afraid
Of the beautiful myriad,
Understanding how addictive
Compulsiveness can be.

Opulent pleasure
Invades my space,
Stinging reality
With a new perspective,
Numbing submission
In a morphine choke-hold.

Sound and color bend,
A sensational delight
Of exotic flairs
And pendulums humming;
It’s unlike anything I’ve known
Except for his smile.

The Rivers

Bold, wide, and gently rolling or narrow, crisp, and clear, 
rushing over bedrock. Broad shouldered to carry the burden
of the depths, or lithe and athletic, coursing swiftly down a
stream. Men stand and gaze transfixed by the timeless
rippling and unfolding of your waters.

The Rivers

Provider of food and bounty. Transporter of goods and 
people. Pathway toward dark, uninhabited places.
Prime mover of the soil. Your course and banks perpetually
changing, birthing lowlands and broad deltas. Seeker
of lower elevations and home of deep wellsprings.

The Rivers

You bequeath the gifts of the waters from your eternal flow
to the veins and arteries of all life on earth. You are the 
medium of cool, molten flow; a go-between from modest rivulet 
to vast sea or ocean abyssal. Your soul composes the antiphonal
music of the waterfall and rain bearing cloud. Motion is the 
purpose of your existence or eventually, all life perishes.

The Rivers

Men seek more than your bounty. They crave more than a 
quick drink of your cooling waters, hoping to slake a passing
thirst. Our souls yearn for more than adventure along your realms.
We long to meld our spirit with yours; and in doing so, to feel eternal.

The Rivers

7-31-14

Soaring Forever

Now soaring high above the lands
that form the Big Sur shore,
her wings enjoin the wind and sky
set free forevermore.
Where hills, broad shouldered, meet the sea
eternal, vast, and blue,
and cloud-laced skies above the earth
now greet her soul so true.
She soars, a butterfly set free, 
o'er all her life has seen.
Her memory, still rich to us,
now shares its golden sheen.

And longer than white waves have coursed
the California shore, 
and deeper than the ocean or 
the heavens men explore,
the gentle hands of God will guide
her wings forevermore.

                     For Nancy
                     7-16-15
Form: Verse


A Teacher Should Have Teacher-Like Qualities

They sit gossiping 
around on chairs
Under shady walnut
Sh! Sh! Backbiting! 
Abusing! Loud laughing…
having fun!
A proud young man 
newly appointed
Abused his pupils in 
anger
When I in innocence 
interrupted him
And reminded of his 
class,
For the poor pupils I saw 
were waiting
Opening their books on 
their bags.

Another one, a Master, I 
saw was pulling his 
inferior female 
colleague’s arm
And dragging her in…!

A lecturer kissing his girl 
students on cheeks, 
whispering in their ears, 
and 
embracing…!

A broad shouldered tall 
teacher would kiss and 
bite
The plum-cheeks of my 
fair-looking class-
fellows,
One among now is a KPS 
officer!

An old lame teacher,
A drinker, abused the 
pupils all the time,
Often sitting cross-
legged, lighting a cigar.

O! Let’s stop it here… 
but a sick Sikh 
headmaster
Now I see had been 
highly communal
Would beat at prayer-
time
The poor pupils 
sweating in sun,
Without seeing  the 
wooden-slates
And beating with willow-
twigs their soft thighs.

Thanks to the highly 
disciplined modern 
schools
In private sector
But the curriculum be 
child centered
And not fatiguing and 
boring.

O O!  Recently I have 
heard of the teachers 
Who gave me a 
humiliating nickname,
One is shouting and 
hurling stones at people,
Another is dumbfounded, 
hardly talking to any one.
 
Whom have you hired 
teachers...?
Drivers and Boucher—
I wonder and I ponder…
But, let I at least protest.
© Fayaz Bhat  Create an image from this poem.

***** Theory

Old Jane Gallagher, 
she was fine, 
in that sun shining on an every-day-girl sort of way.
Giggling 
as her checkers clacked and she stacked up her kings, 
funny 
how young women enter men’s senses and take over their hearts.
Young women 
with fresh friendly faces, and smooth, soft skin, 
basking in the glow 
of adolescent light 
during comfortable, warm, summer days, 
embedding colloquial tones
into malleable brains of dreaming young men.
There, they reside in ideal perfection 
with their skinny naked step fathers prancing around, 
showing off hairy legs and sipping cheap booze 
to numb exhibitionist tendencies.

Soft-shoeing on the men’s room floor 
in your red, felt, hunting hat, 
what do you think you’re doing?
Young man filled with illusions of sweet girls 
sipping sun tea and playing games with neighbor boys.
That handsome sporty roommate 
scraping off his five-o-clock shadow 
is going to conquer your innocent princess 
in the back seat of a darkened, parked car.
Go down and tell her, “Hello!”
Go on, don’t be shy!
She only bites at the peak of her lust.
Like you had a chance, 
putting a half nelson on your sporty roommate, 
your skinny arms couldn’t hold old Jane, 
let alone, a broad shouldered stud 
wearing your hound’s tooth jacket.

Poor skinny hipster should be writing about sexy Jane Gallagher, 
not sexy men entertaining Jane’s periphery existence.
Better let some repulsive coincidence 
take your mind off the intimacy you’ll be missing.
Your coming-of-age tale 
will be watching an unkempt recluse 
squeezing a large puss filled zit in the mirror.

A Cowboy From Tulsa

I once knew a young cowboy in Tulsa.
He was broad shouldered with longish blonde hair.
He rodeo’d with the best of that breed,
And he was champion of our county fair.

He was something to see with the women. 
Always had a new beauty in his sight.
Never heard ‘em complain about nothin’-
He disappeared in the dead of the night.

We’ve got a high school rodeo team now.
About the best that you’ll find anywhere.
Four ropers, three bull riders and a clown –
They are all broad shouldered with long blonde hair.

8/30/2017
For poetry contest Bittersweet for Kevin Shaw
Form: Quatrain


Premium Member Humble But Heroic

He was the leader of the band till age ninety-three
Won the Senior Olympics five-mile race thirty times
In the Depression Dad worked to feed his family
And succeeded by pinching all nickels and dimes

Never raised his voice in anger; that was not Dad’s way
Gave money to educate Native Americans
But he didn’t once mention the cash he gave away
To animal rights causes and disabled veterans

At six feet, broad-shouldered, he handled Mom’s depression
And brightened children’s lives with his dramatic antics
Making up stories on the spot with imagination
He mastered the art of pulling laughs from his bag of tricks

Friends were jealous; none had a father as kind as mine
Imagine the pride I felt when he walked me down the aisle
A humble man who never complained, not even one whine
Though I’m alone now, Dad made my childhood worthwhile

He didn’t wear Superman’s cape or have a magic ring
Some might have mistaken him as an ordinary man
But Dad set the bar so high, to me he was a king
No boys could ever match him, the hero of our clan
 


*For Jeanette Fisher’s “Holding Out for a Hero” Contest
Form: Quatrain

Which Part Did You Fool Her Eyes

You reek of fancy smell
That one worn by a kingly son
You spend your daddy’s golden coins
And drive like a daring prince to town
You open doors like gentlemen
And lead her way to tricky nonse
You smile like she was your world
And dance until she finds romance
Which bait did she first bite?
Was it the fancy smell
Of your rotting four-wheel drive?
Was it your golden coins-
Which piled up credits from your daddy’s bank?
Or the gentle gesture like a sheepish boy,
But tigers roared behind you as time went by. 
So which part did you get her fooled?
For neither are you a pretty man.
Nor a roguish broad-shouldered cowboy.
Your small eyes know no mystery
No deep soul to unravel
Your hair is losing healthy strands
And boy, those wrinkles lining up!-
Where did that stress come from?
Your nose they also didn’t seem right
Your lips, oh never mind!
Your brain can count a hundred times, I’ll give you that.
But let x be you, and y be her,
A riddle you cannot solve 
So one last time I ask
Which part did you fool her eyes?
© Cheri Teng  Create an image from this poem.

An Old Cowboy's Thunder

An Old Cowboy's Thunder

I stopped at a bar with a big neon star,
And looked for a seat in the crowd. 
I saw a grizzled old gent who looked pretty spent. 
He sat alone at a table, tall and proud. 
 
I said "Pardon me, sir, this place is a blur, 
Do you mind if I pull up a chair?" 
He said, "Join me, my friend, an elbow we'll  bend, 
And talk about things we may share." 
 
I judged him four score, but he could have been more,
And he'd cowboyed all over the West. 
His face was like leather from the sun and the weather.
There was a poet's heart under that vest.

8/16/2016


As he told of a time that stood out in his mind,
A huge cowboy walked in through the door. 
He was broad shouldered and lean and looked kinda mean, 
Like he wanted to settle a score.

When he spotted our place he set a smirk on his face
And dragged up a chair and sat down. 
He said, "If you don’t mind, this place is all mine.
Go sit somewhere else in this town!"

 Well, the old man just grinned while he scratched at his chin,
Like he'd seen this movie before.
He just sort of rose and broke the cowboy’s nose
With a left that came up from the floor.
 
Then he hit him with a bottle that was goin' full throttle
And left him sprawled out by the table.
He sat down with a sigh and wondered just why
Folks will take on more than they’re able.
 
Well, I left there that night with a different insight
On just what might be true of Old Men.
Look beyond what is pale and seems ever so frail,
And just imagine where that old man has been

Rodeo Cowboy

I knew a rodeo cowboy in Tulsa
Broad shouldered with shiny blonde hair
He was a sight to behold with women
Knew 'em all at our county fair

We’ve got a high school rodeo team now
'Bout the best you’ll find anywhere
Four ropers, three riders and a clown –
Broad shouldered with shiny blonde hair


July, 2016
For Contest Two Stanzas - Two Only, for Broken Wings
Form: Rhyme

A Young Cowboy From Tulsa

A Young Cowboy From Tulsa

I once knew a young cowboy in Tulsa
Broad shouldered with long blonde hair
He rodeo’d with the best of that breed
And was champion of our county fair.

He was a sight to behold with women
A new girl every Saturday night
Never heard ‘em complain about nothin’
They all said he treated them right.

Then one night in the dead of the Winter
He left town and was never seen again
We heard he had settled down in Texas 
Or he was seen in Lawton now and then.

The time passed quickly since he left us
All the women got on with their lives
Thought they couldn’t live without him
Now they are all makin’ excellent wives.

We’ve got a high school rodeo team now
About the best you’ll find anywhere
Four ropers, three riders and a clown –
Broad shouldered with long blonde hair.

Premium Member Beneath the Lights

Now that the half-lit vigil of the housewife has ended
And the petitions for forgiveness have begun,
To what shall we aspire?
The worlds are set in motion
And the damaged walls were mended,
Not by the strong willed, broad shouldered
Man of action, but rather
By the joining of two minds,
The blending of thought and feeling,
Shared silences that resonate
Beyond the realm of words.



Copyright © 1997-2018 by Benjamin Toney.  All rights reserved.
Image credit: Mending Wall by Robert Frost

Rodeo In Tulsa

I knew a rodeo champ in Tulsa
He was broad shouldered with shiny blonde hair
He was a sight to behold with women
And knew all of them at our county fair

Then one night in the dead of the Winter
He left town and was never seen again
We heard he had settled down in Texas 
Or he was seen in Lawton now and then.

We’ve got a high school rodeo team now
'Bout the best you’ll find anywhere 'round here
Four ropers, three riders and a young clown –
They're all broad shouldered with shiny blonde hair



September 24, 2016
For Contest 210, Brian Strand
Form: Rhyme

Covenstead Goblin

during the Eves of festival
a broad shouldered man
came into or near
the Layer were Witches were said to dwell
He came there to challenge
the Goblin who made
pots in the cave
Witches, Witches  ask him here
cast your spell and make him appear.
I wish this Goblin to weave my baskets
I ask you witches
to tell him and ask it!
Spear, spear, sword
and arrow.
the becks of hawks, eagles, and sparrows
said the Wicca Witches.
weave your own baskets to
use as bags
to fill with stones
so heavy one must drag.
snails, and worms, and lizards to
if we were married now we're through
mount your horse and be on your way
be gone, be gone
hear what we say!
then suddenly the goblin appeared
and challenged the broad-shouldered man.
the tumbled
and fell on the baskets and pots
the grappled rolling around
non-stop.
the broad-shouldered man
grabbed a bag
and placed on the Goblins head
to calm his mad!
he told him he'd
feed him and cloth him
if he came to
weave his baskets
the Goblin grunted
as the Broad-shouldered man asked it.
he took him off
to make his baskets
a bag over his head
they mounted the horses
and off the fastest.
Weeks later
here again they came
the witches were in any mood
for these foolish games.
they casted a spell
and the broad-shouldered man fell
and became a frog
that with a tail
the Goblin grunted
and returned to the cave
making  the Witches pots
like he were there slave!
Form: Ballade

Premium Member They Call Me Big Toe

They call me Big Toe he said.
He was tall, broad shouldered, handsome.
I looked at his shoes. 
They were enormous, probably to provide for the big toe.

I wondered if it was both big toes or just one big toe.
I thought it would be too personal to ask, 
So I kept my thoughts to myself.
Glad to meet you Big Toe, I said.

The other adults started laughing.
I am big Joe, he told me. Not big toe.
I stopped looking at his feet at this point,
and started wondering about my hearing.

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