Best Blackens Poems


Premium Member Edges

ebony edges
twilight blackens sketched shadows~
scarlet-stained sunset

dusk dribbles dewdrops
flower petals atrophied~
evening primrose, bloom

pinwheel galaxies
swirling stars orbit black holes~
bats shadow the night

dawn pierces night's heart
scarlet wounds bleed crimson light~
a hummingbird's hum

day resurrected
scurrying shadows scatter~
colors coalesce

Premium Member Tears of Blood

             In
             my
           veins
        flows the
       blood that
     drips from the 
    pain and misery                                      of
    my lost sorrow.                                     Drip,
      drip in never                                      ending
         streams                                        of crimson,
                                                           tears flowing
                                                           from  swollen
                                                          eyes. The dark
                                       of                    sad lonely
                                    nights                     calls
                                   my soul.
                                  I feel not
                                 the pain as                                   it
                                blackens my                               ebon
                                glass heart.                               Never
                                      will I                                  try again
                                                                             to feel joy
                                                                             as once in             my
                                                                                youth              I had.
       It                                                                                             is but
    a sad                                                                                          dream,
    a lost                                                                                          desire,
   gone in                                                                                        the fall
   of each                                                                                         blood
     filled                                                                                         tear that
       I                                                                                                cry.



12/04/15

Hold My Gaze In a Drop of Dew

There is nothing left of life
 that death cannot resolve,
 times velocity spins on stolen lips
 and minute pieces of adamantine
 pierce the edge of soles
 worn with pain 

---- 

Right here,
 Where night and dawn merge
 the membrane strains
 cleaving, as shade blackens blue
 for mere milli seconds

Standing in the hollows of night
 still, watching forever shimmering
 in the shadowed corner of my eye,
 I, me, always a curious creature
 swallow bricks and mortar
 tasting truth 

In my head an orchestra plays
 the symphonies composed of my life
 strings wring my heart with melodies
 wrought in pain and self-loathing
 shame and eventual surrender
 to the beat 

But,
 in the beauty of renewal
 in the peace of your reflections
 I've wondered at the universe
 memorizing the mysteries unsolved
 ever tantalized neurons smashed
 awakening ever and over again 

Sleep has been a foreign land
 settled by the fortunate
 longed for by the tortured
 spirits of my mind 

Yet in these dark magnificent galaxies
 when snores softly sigh in peace
 or monsters haunt your dreams,
 I have watched millennia of mourning
 shatter the promise of darkness evermore,
 I wondered as sunshine held a drop of dew
 and as light of hope captured the ghosts of night
 banishing them forevermore, or until nights edge 

I am a watcher and a teller of tales
 Singer of forbidden songs and tragedy,
 downtrodden, I rose to fight again and again
 with a schizophrenic mind harnessed
 within the beauty of a single star
 and the promise of humanity
 in the kindness of a strangers touch 

Now at the end of all journeys
 my final battle lays in that
 which I know not, shackled
 that foreign land whisks me away
 again and again, dreams cease
 as moisture rolls from my brow 

---

Slowly, slowly, slowly
 winding down into nothingness
 Gently, gently, gently
 I will lay down your cries of grief 

My words aren’t never-ending
 my breath will someday cease
 Yet true beauty and wonder lies
 in the wondrous infinity of peace

just look into these eyes overflowing with pain
 know !! there will be an end, even that shall ease ...


Escaping Rita

Chased mercilessly 
over well- worn tar 
palpable loss pushes 
a sable brush 
dunked in dread
a furious deluge
of fear 
 oozes out
blackens every inch
 of familiar landscape
what if’s 
eat through 
 the still static blue horizon
making a meal 
of unborn dreams 
slaked only by
hastily grabbed 
history 
coupled with 
ragged spirits 
 that desperately 
haul hope north 
safe haven 
on strange soil 
still dark hours
 away

Northward Bound

Death shadows, furious, frenzied, fought
Waiting for this wretched soul to rot
They redeemed me, tortured me, ceasing not 

Crows perch upon my severed breast
Picking at the insipid flesh 
Vultures of glee coo and ratify my rest

Love pierces my heart that is dead
Maddening my severed head
Feeding ones engorged instead

Deprived and empty of soul within
My ribcage grows bare and thin
Eaten away by my own cruel kin

Skeleton bare and scorned
Fowl breasts of youth unadorned
Cascaded in grotesque glory, basked and ever-mourned

I fly! Hovering over my body too weak
As tears fall down my hungry beak
Let me fly north toward winter so bleak!

The tears freeze on my cold bones
In the dark snow that blackens, I grow old
As wind, birds and corpses forever moan

Homeward north I fly…I feed
I, the coal-beaked corpse still need
To roam…to rot…to unremittingly greed

I am shadow, vulture, corpse, woman—all in one
Feeding on my own meat, enriching everyone
Absent of my own skin, the pain has just begun





For Justin Bordner's Death Shadow contest

This Is Pain

I can feel the slow sleep sitting
In a window made for slitting
Lullabys that have no morals
Tales of lies that seem so formal

Snow flakes falling on the glass wall
Melt before they can live at all.
Toxic waves of rude depression
Desperate days, & unjust opression

Is this pain? That burrows in my heart?
Am I just insane? Or am I falling apart?

Soft hysteria lives in my head
Sweetly whispers words for the dead
Trying to tell me it's not over
All I need is angry closure.

She just wants you when you're lonely.
You can never be her one & only.
Everytime you shed tears for her,
Her slender finger grasp just grows tighter.

Is this pain? That burrows in my heart?
Am I just insane? Or am I falling apart?

You are not enough woe her.
You can not make her forget.
You are not enough to love her.
She'll play you like a broken record again.

And Again. 


Is this pain? That burrows in my heart?
Am I just insane? Or am I falling apart?
This is pain, that blackens my heart.
This is pain that takes my whole world apart.


Premium Member Wobbly Hands True Strength

Written: April 17, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 

Quote: "Lovely days don't come to you, you should walk to them." by Rumi

            ***********************

Life will not coach you until it happens, 
Serendipitously, it flows, upsetting our souls.  
When you glance, you feel no longer whole,
Leave dreams behind until the frost blackens.

Love doesn't always reach out to stay,
It often teaches you how deeply you feel.
It seems like it's just dangling a kneel, 
as if it were writing you a swiping essay. 

Being whole does not teach you resilience,
You discover it when you're crushed by life.
You proceed with wobbly hands and strife,
Grace is born by shaking, not just experience.
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.

A Good Man

There's a Good Man just up that hilltop there.
A Good Man,
He loves all children, both the troublemaker and the perfect ones.
He loves the poor and gives them alms and shelter.
He loves the hungry and thirsty, he feeds them and gives them wine.
He loves all who mourn, and comforts them.
He loves the ill and heals them of their ailments.
He loves the peacemakers, and befriends them.
Among these things, this Good Man loves sinners, and he dines with them.

Despite these things, that Good Man is up there on that hilltop, among the thieves and the criminals.

Despite his love for all, he's treated like a murderer, flogged and beaten.

Tortured;

All for his blasphemy.

He was forced up that hilltop against his will,
But never did I see him strike any who condemned him,
Nor did I see him curse all who struck him.

As the beating sun scorned upon the crowd and the Good Man,
No longer carrying his piece of wood upon his back;
His face turns upward, to the sky.
And he calls for Elijah.

Soon, the Good Man dies. 
The King of the Jews dies by Roman hands.

As the Good Man dies, 
The earth trembles
The sky turns cloudy and blackens out the sun
The winds nearly blows us all on our backside.

Soon, it becomes apparent to all onlookers,
That this man was no Blaspheimer.
The Good Man was the Son of God.

And instead of bowing down to him,
We crucify him.

And so,
I tell you,

On the top of that hilltop,
Dead,
Among the sinners, 
Is a Good Man.

A Man who loved all.
A man sent by Elijah and killed by us.
Jesus of Nazareth.
King of the Jews.

Premium Member Poetry Is the Remedy

i life
Reflections in the mirror increase resentment.
Tarnished heart pursues vengeful contentment
Disillusioned, you hide in fictitious make believe,
possessed by demons who purblind and deceive.
In your bogus twisted fabricated state of mind,
answers to your questions you shall never find.
Your fraudulent mask poses, deceptively concocted,
mocking with a grim masquerade you have adopted.

ii death
As your heart blackens with the absence of light,
Lucifer summons you closer, to his sheer delight.
Loved ones cannot save you from hell's burning heat,
there's nothing behind you but shadows of deceit.
Now that your toxic nature has begun to expire,
you can no longer suck energy like a vampire.
Nobody cares to listen to your forged confession.
There is only joy in the absence of your aggression.

iii after life
Pain like hungry howling wolves irritates skin deep.
After all this time, why do you sabotage my sleep?
Am I cursed that I see your silhouette in my dreams,
I'm struggling to ignore your torrid smouldering screams.
Why continue to haunt me like a vicious viper?
Firing shells of cyanide like a silent sniper.

iv remedy for change
I'm fortunate that my quill has become my shield,
for every wound, poetry is my remedy to be healed.
My ink is my saviour, bursting through my vein,
a catharsis for peace, as from hate I abstain.
© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Serial Keeler

Foreboding of a tempestuous storm, 
it blackens as it draws near, 
a cumulonimbus in towering form, 
extending to the troposphere, 

So cast off mooring and slacken the line, 
break free while there's still time, 
'cause I'll pull you under if you don't let go, 

Save yourself and abandon ship, 
I'll take on water and sink too quick, 
in gales of winds the swells arise, 
these waves will break and so will I, 

Roars of thunder and screeching wind, 
sheets of lightning and pelting rains, 
walls of waves will batter within,
until our stability wanes,

So cast off mooring and slacken the line, 
untether your heart from mine, 
'cause I'll drown us both if you don't let go,

Save yourself and abandon ship,
I'm taking on water and sinking quick, 
in gales of winds the swells arise, 
these waves are breaking and so am I

To a "dark Princess"

Oh this cloud that shrouds you, dear
  blackens and traps that heart so fine
 Leaving doubt where there never should be
  Can't you see?  I would shout so loud...
 If only I knew you could see...or hear me

A distorted mirror lies to you
 leaving tears fall for your poor heart
   or anger in place of where sorrow sickened
Crashing like waves and subsiding tides
  praised be that smile rarely seen
    shining to me willingly 

My dark princess...I see your angel
  She is effortlessly beautiful and free
    She flys graceful and lovely 
  She basks in th light you feel deprived

She is your other side...hiding
     hiding only from you

Death of Desires By a Sin

Evrytime that you were near
My eyes would have that glitter
My heart would beat faster
My smile would get wider

My feelings for you
were so very strong
I jst wanted to kiss you
And hold you for real long

As u gently rolled down the
Tips of ur fingers on my skin
desires grew within me
I knew I was comitting a sin

But with all that passion
I only craved for more
It felt so true to the heart
I assumed that it was pure

The temptations to stay close to you 
Made me so intoxicated 
That I cudnt realize tht this 
Wasn’t gonna stay and that we would be separated

That's when I felt
The fear of this sin
While ur passionate touch
Went on my skin

In a moment my heart,
My body, my soul,
Were filled with nothing but guilt -
Guilt of the sin
Guilt of the temptations

The regret was so deep 
Nothing within me was left
it killed all the desires,
the passion, the tempt

no more was in me 
Just lik a dead rose
As it slowly blackens
Was how my heart had chose

Blackened with the sins
Wilted by the guilt
and that's when I realized
it was a - 
death of desires by a sin.
© Salwa A.  Create an image from this poem.

The Alluring Dance

Aye, what a revolution in red and orange against the
venom of society and culture
With the flowers of right palm though a gesture of dance
in fact covers her tears
A story of blue tension and deep emotion in red flamenco
so flamboyantly executes the dancer
The crimson movement of the lyrical arms and torso 
in sync with the guitar is awesome
Unique euphoria of exuberance in the swirl of a female figure
so provocative


What a dancing dream doing up the drawings of 
the body on the fly
What a message of moons in mounds you convey 
through the crafty curves
And each passing passion pulsates from prose to
poetry of muscles and bones
Eros encouraging us to transcend ourselves through
the journey of desire like a fountain
From brownish black towards the orange flames
on the comely conical mountains

And the warmly amber valley as it mingles with the
flames from the dancing spark
Blackens darkens and then harkens at joyous response
of mesmerized connoisseurs
Deepens the dense dance still further by generating
romantic proposition in her gestures
Unstoppable time hypnotized to stop for a moment to
stand and see how infinity can dance
Time itself in much ado on the long neck of
reddening movement

Aye, you dancing fire spreading your oranges everywhere
from Andalusia to Madrid
And then all over the globe amazing you me and all
in modern style of elegant gestures
Sliding the shoulder blades down the back and thus
the chest held proudly 
Inviting inquisitive attention to read the poems
up to the chin and down the tall back
Closing the eye for a few seconds we see in awe our fertile
dear earth in a dance of rebellion

The earthy and raw in a fascinating gesture of life
we do need to feel so much
That while in the midst of viewing what you interpret
we too get merged in the dancing colour
Aha! What a phenomenon

____________________________________________________
September 23, 2017
For the contest:Poems that paint a picture 3
Hosted by: Silent One

Love Poem Number 2

The first time I glimpsed your beautiful smile,
I couldn’t believe you were real, my ideal!
Your beauty captured my attention and soul ,
I could sense it immediately, you make me whole.
Now the distance between us and every moment apart,
is so painful and sad, it blackens my heart.
For you, my heart longs, your gentle, kind touch,
Your smiles, your pure love, its all just too much,
For my lonely sad soul to be far apart,
I crave you, I need you, you are my sweetheart!
Now that you have come into my black and white world,
Color abounds, and rainbows unfurled.
A new joy in my heart, for love once again I am filled,
A new hope, a new faith, happiness re-instilled.
You are my true joy, and hope for forever,
Im thankful for you and Im glad were together.

Night

Night.

Nay-it not now, when the darkness still crawls nearer
Night you shall always be the welcomed Angel, to implore
To nay-it, a message the sun has left, with fires
Oh shades of the day, magma and ice
Always at heels of each, enemies and friends
Which one, which one comforts me?
Nights of nay-its succesful reigns..
When upon my creaky atsatsa*, I counts the fruits
deka...
...eve,
.. etor...
Sun oh sun, fire out of the Brahma's hearth, you reign in history
my journey has started
A soul searching
Reflections
Mesmerises
To clean the brass and shine its surface
For the lights boasts of shines to soar
As I clean my self of debris of old, of old ages
Ah, night, nay-it, all that blackens me with blots.
Now
.....till
when.......

Lamptey Godson Kofi (c) 2012

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