Best Bemoaning Poems


Premium Member Violin Notes Fall From Heaven No More

Her trembling twilight 
dims with streaking purple tears
bruised by youthful years of bleeding pain
hurting but never hugged—
locked in arms of atmosphere’s apathy
that smeared with fiendish fingers
a contusing plum palette
across any hope in her godforsaken horizon—

this sorrowful songbird 
who sings with the shattered purity 
of violin strains falling from Heaven
finds her bemoaning musical notes adrift—
lost on breezy deaf days
as she is once again thrown down 
from the self-serving skyscape 
by the hateful hands of wildcat winds.

In the deep inkwell
of lullaby-less lonely nights
where never a tender nursery rhyme
has ever set her free
are memories scribed of storm-battered days
and weighing heavily on Libra’s scales
are the injustices 
of dreams she will never live
nor flights of fancy she will never take
as her sire of solar scorch and temper flare
—a warpath warrior against her springtime
sleeps soundly on a bloated bed
over-stuffed with betrayal and broken promises
while her merciless maternal moon— 
distant and cloud covered
does not bother to wander the coal haze
with a lantern’s sharp beam 
to cut through stranglehold-folds of darkness 
to cast a light upon; to rescue her fractured form— 

an angel beckons as breath and beat fade
her guardian as she passes through Earth's shadow
beyond the coldness of mother-moon's umbra 
following to where warm sugar-stars soprano sing.

Tonight— a stricken sparrow 
folds her fledgling wings never to fly again…
will land or air ever miss her?
Categories: bemoaning, child abuse, death, Lullaby,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Wept

she roams cross the land her heart so bitter blue
leaving behind frosty morning dew
icy veil sadly unkept
laden woe upswept
she speechless
wept
left dreamless
numb regret windswept
no kind soul to intercept
cold bemoaning howling winds a clue
she roams cross the land her heart so bitter blue



AP: 2nd place 2020

Submitted on January 22, 2023 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE - ANDAREE sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE -  RANKED 3rd

and July 7, 2019 for contest VERSE A FAVOURED THEME sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

Originally posted on May 1, 2018
Categories: bemoaning, grief, howl, hurt, solitude,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Rain

Last time it rained was in April.
                                      It did not rain that much, 
                            but it was enough to dirty everywhere. 
                             You see, it was a south easterly wind
     and the clouds arrived laden with sand from the north African desert.
  That was nearly five months ago, and the farmers are already up in arms,
                   bemoaning lack of water as they till the arid soil.

                                         dust flies in the air
                                    the sun blazes overhead
                                      sweat drips profusely

                             Prayers have not gone unanswered!
                          Dark clouds creep from behind the hills
                   fast multiplying, ominously, obliterating the blue.
           The calm hot air is ruffled by a timid breeze which soon turns 
     to gusty wind. A sudden horizontal flash followed by drawling thunder 
            precedes a few big drops of rain which testily hit the ground.

                                          increase of tempo
                                     deafening cymbals clash
                                           erupting deluge 

                  Water gathers then flows steadily down the streets;
            thirsty fields drink greedily; trees bathe in delight, relishing
    heaven’s kiss of life on their moribund leaves, roots breathing in relief.
    Then, worn out, the wind slowly abates; so do the thunder and the rain. 
The clouds shyly disperse, permitting an unobstructed view of the sky above.
                 Satiated, the sundrenched land savours the afterglow. 

                                            sensual appeal
                                        petrichor emanation 
                                       veins pleasantly throb 


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Contest: Rain Rain Come My Way
Sponsor: binibining P.iNk
8th June 2016
Categories: bemoaning, rain,
Form: Haibun

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Premium Member The Writer In Me Wants You To Know

I sense and feel mystique of its appeal
In vibrant, verdant, blossoming spring,
Splendorous prairies undulating breeze,
Resplendent falling of autumnal leaves,
Glacial winds bemoaning a frozen sigh,
A cerulean terpsichore of ocean tides~
I sense and feel, yet can’t cage its wings.

Purposeful, evocative, musings unwind
When elixir of missives invigorates mind
In tears of joy glittering mother’s eyes,
Holding hand of father, an innocent smile,
Hungry bawls tearing impoverished lands,
Cheers echoing hopes of clapping hands,
Grievous calls unleashed by fate unkind, 
An uneventful existence berating its grind.

Though I pretend to reign world of words
And impute resonance to songs of birds
And conjure kisses from lovelorn woes
And dare personifying feelings of stone,
I struggle in thoughts to stage my show
Striving to rhyme verses stubbornly prose
Dawdling daydreams of poetic meadows
Attributing forms to shapeless shadows
Clueless of the exit from wordless throes.

Ah! dear reader, the poet in you knows,
Much alike an eagle boundless in freedom
Flight of artistry I’m unable to control,
Passions of its symphony, I do not own,
Depth of its ocean shall remain unknown.

August 12, 2021
Categories: bemoaning, art, muse, poetry, words,
Form: Verse

Premium Member Do You Want a Tear

Do you want a tear?
Do you want one of mine? I've plenty to share,
for tears pool around my heart and linger there.
Do you wish someone would shed a tear for you;
because in reality, they never do?

Do you save a tear?
Do you save a tiny tear for you alone;
all your grief stored in that drop you call your own?
Do you think your heart will carry such a weight
or break into fragments, bemoaning life's fate?

Do you fear a tear?
Do you fear you'll drown in a torrent of pain
as the tears spill from your eyes like drops of rain?
Do you believe spilling tears makes you look weak;
undermining the reputation you seek?

Do you hoard a tear?
Do you hoard a secret tear, one you won't share;
a tiny little drop you've hidden somewhere?
Do you silently shed that one single tear;
to mourn a lonely life traumatized by fear?
Categories: bemoaning, angst, depression, emotions, feelings,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Pippa and Harry

Pippa, sans slipper,loves causing a fight
She dampened Kate's spotlight,inviting her spite
Pip's lured a  royal bastard, without much invite
And smiles sly and alluring, to the gossips delight

Unlike Cinderella, she's swept with no broom
Nor scrubbed any floors on her knees in her room
In fact her slim legs are both pampered and groomed
For her dresses are only one  inch past her bloom.

Harry's wild antics have stirred some debate
The red headed playboy is in rut and must mate 
Poor Harry, your passion's a fly on your plate
The fly's actions have been a royal nuisance of late.!

Britain longs to hear Pippa bemoaning her plight
A fair maiden in heat, a paparazzi's delight
No chance for Prince Harry to rescue this sprite
His sword's stuck in His zipper, it caused quite a bite

This royal fairy tale will end as all others, 
Bland William and Kate will beget two royal brothers
Pippa and Harry play the press like two lovers
And we'll await photo's of them under the covers.
Categories: bemoaning, funny
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Chilled

The “Christmas Freeze” of ’83 left Mom’s prize Oleander wilted
Bemoaning its demise, her heart gave way in the backyard
Irony cast its spell in spring and revived the Oleander...
    If only it could have done the same for Mom




*July 26, 2020
For Constance La France’s “Four Lines Poetry Contest”
Categories: bemoaning, flower, mother,
Form: Free verse

Pink Vulnerability

I continue to feel
the searing pain. 
ever constant.
so keen.
Not the kind
    that heals fast,
      open wound that closes.
But, the kind that stays vulnerably
       with the passing years.
Three decades 
        and still counting.

Woe to this pain!
With laden anguish, 
The heart's bemoaning.
Thinking it was born
     without a name.
Only to find then
     at a much later time;
giving in.
Oblivious now.
Unashamed
    that my bosom groans,
        complains.
Categories: bemoaning, cancer, depression, emotions, health,
Form: Prose Poetry

A Letter To Myself

A Letter to Myself



Should I give up writing
Seems all this bleating and wailing
Bemoaning this lot of love
I am allocated to feel
But never touch

Should I stop showing the world
Such a pitiful and pathetic face
As it twists and grapples
Dug in my heart
With its suffocating blade
Of aloneness

Where I am lost

When are the fluorescing lines
Of my gratitude
What are my words praises to love
With this eternal gift
Floating me in the fires
Of hot air balloons
But still gut wrenches out my soul
In this separation

“Come on,” I tell myself
What wrapped delight have I known more
I should be proud of my hunger
Feed it with all the imagined embraces
Just for her

More a rock I should
Than this wet dripping weak kneed flannel be

More colourful and joyous
In my need
In deliverance believes

Faith it should be
For the ever bonded
To such a fate
Allows my love to consume me
Her heart so tender
Must needs better of me
Than this whimpering sop
Who’s begging and pleading
Has no real foundation in my bones

More eloquent is she
More rapturous  
Than the blazing anthologies of Isis
The hymn and rhythm of her
Calls to me 
Shout of exultant
Piercing forever’s follicle
Permeable
She saturates

More a kin to glory I should be
More humbled
And less bent to paupers knee
To lift her ankle
And kiss her feet

Rather I should not
Die so
But 
Live
Categories: bemoaning, loveme,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Sailing Home

Three in the morning, and again I dream
Of waves and windblown sails, driving us on.
A petulant ocean, its mood would seem 
Somehow to echo mine, awaiting dawn.
Tossing and turning, creaking and groaning,
It's an old man's bones I hear, bemoaning.
© Peter Rees  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: bemoaning, sleep,
Form: Rhyme

Last Rite Exit

Nearing the end of their fleeting days,
short-inhaled lives infirmly await the long dark
Garrulously tilting fermented liquids in a park,
they watch their former youthful ways

Addled memories of a once robust stride
keep the brown paper covered truth hidden well
Selfish pleasures have left their flesh bodies frail,
weary envious exhalation of tearful pride

Uncomfortable thoughts tinge their mind,
feeble resistance offered in boisterous recollections
Never given to ingest any sobering contemplations,
aged souls possessing only wrinkled opine

Cantankerous wrong heights stooped on a bench,
bemoaning last rites of spirits dead long ago since
Categories: bemoaning, allusion, dark, eulogy, people,
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Bbbooohhh

     "BBBOOOHHH"
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



SPOOKY SCARY SCREAMS
SKELETONS SPINY SINGING
SHUFFLE SNICKERING.

HAUNTED HOUSE HOVERS
HALLOWEEN HOLIDAY HOSTS
HAVOC HAPPENINGS.

VOICES VIBRATE VEINS
VAMPIRES VEX VINTAGE VINE
VOLUMIZING VIEW.

GOBLINS GROAN GROWL GGGRRRHHH!
GHOST GAZEBO GRACES GLEE
GENERATES GRAND GLOW.

WITCHES WONDERLUST
WATCH, WAIT, WINK WITH WITCHERY
WISP WITHOUT WIDE WINGS.

BOOGIE BATS BELFRY
BLOODY BATH BELLOWS BEYOND
BEASTS BEMOANING BBBOOOHHH!!!

ALLITERATION WRITTEN IN HAIKU FOR HALLOWEEN FUN!
Categories: bemoaning, holiday, halloween,
Form: Alliteration

Premium Member Loneliness Is Driving Me Crazy

I wake up in the morning and have to decide which side of the bed I will get out of today – it 
doesn’t really matter, because there is no one there to block my exit on either side.

I turn on the TV, not to see what’s on, but just to hear another voice in the kitchen other than 
the one’s inside my head reminding me that I am having breakfast alone once again.

I once thought that working from home, through the internet, for myself and by myself, 
would be a wonderful thing – but, that was when I used to change out of my pajamas at 
some time during the day.

Now the keyboard sits there mocking me in my loneliness.  The monitor acts more as a 
mirror to remind me I haven’t shaved in weeks than it does to display words of a manuscript 
that I should be working on.

How lonely am I?  I actually called my mother the other day.  Rock bottom.

I watch out my window for the approaching mailman so I can open the door as he is 
depositing bills I can no longer pay into the mail slot on my door.  He says he likes my 
Spiderman pajamas the best.

If I had a reason to do so, I would probably take a shower.  But then, I have become 
accustomed to my own stench and there is nobody else around to offend, save for the 
mailman, who I noticed doesn’t hang around to talk much any more.  Could be related, I 
suppose.

I don’t even please myself any more.  My imagination is not sharp enough to fantasize about 
things I haven’t experienced for real in such a long time.

There was a time when I would not answer my phone when an 800 number was displayed on 
the handset.  Today I do.  Talking to someone bemoaning that I am late with another 
payment, again, is, at least, talking to someone.

Stop mocking me Qwerty! 

I have given names to the inanimate objects in my apartment.  At times, they talk back to 
me.  I think today may be my birthday; the dishwasher was smiling at me.  The dirty dishes 
inside now have mold on them.

The mailman didn’t come today – perhaps it is Sunday.  I wore my Spiderman pajamas for 
no good reason.  

I didn’t write anything again today.  These words are just floating around in my head.  I am 
pretending you are a stranger reading them to make me feel a little less lonely.  You 
believing you are that stranger is just further validation that I am, indeed, crazy.
© Joe Flach  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: bemoaning, introspectionwords, me, me, time,
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Turning Your Life Around

The Lord will supply all my needs and will fill up my cup.
You are a child of the King, bow to no negative circumstance or critical invective, so stand up!
God has wonderful plans for your life if you will just listen up!
God's spirit breathe new hope and life into you. 
Believe who He says you are, not what others say to insult and humiliate you.
Embrace a bold and courageous attitude. 
Always be polite never rude.
Believe who God says you are, not what enemies tag you,
To yourself just be honest and remain true.
Ask God to help you to "open your mouth and increase your territory" (prayer of Jabez in 1 
Chronicles 4:10). 
Prepare what you are going to say and then practice articulating your message clearly. 
When all is dark around you and no light shines at the end of your tunnel of despair,
Always remember God loves you and cares.
Get up and walk; don't just sit around bemoaning your problems. 
Beloved only our God can solve them.
Allow God to do a "new thing" in you (Isaiah 43)., Choose to become new again.
Ask God for a vision for your life, talk with God as you would a friend. 
Take a sabbatical rest especially when you are being blessed.
He does all of this so we can ready where there is new danger.
Be quick to listen, slow to speak, and slow to anger.
Categories: bemoaning, faith, happiness, inspirational, life,
Form: Rhyme

Call of the Sirens

The harbour rests from the rolling waves			
Of a windswept and tempestuous sea			
Beyond the breakwater lay sailors graves		
Where shipwrecks in eternal sleep rest free		
Once lured upon the rocks they didn’t see		
Now ghosts of sailors take their endless rest		
With sirens haunting cries, their bemoaning plea		
Heard in the wind and the waves foaming crest		

Yachts now moored, as their owners misbehaves	
In dim lit cabins with lovers on their knee		
Pink gin’s at sunset and acting like knaves		
While jealous husbands spy hiding on the quay		
And lovers sit on their boats drinking Chablis		
Other yachts sit forlorn not looking their best		
Their days spent at sea, with the call of the siren’s banshee	
Heard in the wind and the waves foaming crest		

Fishing boats chug past, their crew now waves	
At those waiting for their catch with impish glee	
On the quayside, fish, their customers now craves	
And the fee for their catch they readily agree		
Then having a meal completely buckshee		
The fishermen go home for a well-earned rest		
No more trawling, hearing sirens or wailing kelpie		
Heard in the wind and the waves foaming crest  		

Life in the harbour for some is all but carefree			
Yet for others it may not be so heaven blest		
As they sail troubled seas where sirens can be		
Heard in the wind and the waves foaming crest
© David Wood  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: bemoaning, fishing, mythology, ocean, sea,
Form: Ballade
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