Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

Wept

she roams cross the land her heart so bitter blue
leaving behind frosty morning dew
icy veil sadly unkept
laden woe upswept
she speechless
wept
left dreamless
numb regret windswept
no kind soul to intercept
cold bemoaning howling winds a clue
she roams cross the land her heart so bitter blue



AP: 2nd place 2020

Submitted on January 22, 2023 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE - ANDAREE sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE -  RANKED 3rd

and July 7, 2019 for contest VERSE A FAVOURED THEME sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Sara Kendrick February 5, 2023 at 11:55 PM Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara Line Gauthier February 6, 2023 at 6:13 AM Thank you very much, Sara ~

Constance La France February 4, 2023 at 7:21 AM Line, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, Constance Line Gauthier February 5, 2023 at 6:49 AM Thank you very much, Constance. Most appreciated ~

Ann Peck February 2, 2023 at 4:47 PM You perfectly paint a picture of a cold and lonely woman! I can see her walking across windswept, barren landscapes. Well done, Line! Line Gauthier February 3, 2023 at 12:53 PM Thank you very much, Ann. Much appreciated ~

Greg Gaul July 8, 2019 at 8:39 PM Interesting structure Line for this teary rhyme. Howling winds certainly are a clue. Congrats on your well deserved award. Ambitious verse skillfully penned. Line Gauthier July 8, 2019 at 9:14 PM Thank you so much, Greg. Not sure what my muse was drinking that night. LOL

Darlene De Beaulieu June 3, 2018 at 6:29 PM hello Lin, a beautiful poem. A sad poem of sadness. have a nice evening my friend. Line Gauthier June 3, 2018 at 6:58 PM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Darlene.

L. J. Carber May 29, 2018 at 11:40 AM Lovely, Line-- should definitely be read aloud for its 'music'! Line Gauthier May 29, 2018 at 4:16 PM Thank you so much, L.J. Most appreciated.

Dale Gregory Cozart May 28, 2018 at 10:40 AM This is beautiful, Line. Line Gauthier May 28, 2018 at 2:39 PM Thank you so much, Dale, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Juliet Ligon May 11, 2018 at 5:15 PM Creative form. I can just feel the chills. Nicely done! Line Gauthier May 11, 2018 at 7:23 PM Thank you so much, Juliet, for your very appreciated visit and comment.

Charlie Knowlton May 10, 2018 at 5:06 AM Such a great feel for one so alone and hurt. Line Gauthier May 10, 2018 at 11:39 AM Thank you for feeling this one. Most appreciated, Charlie.

FJ Thomas May 7, 2018 at 11:11 AM I've never come across this form. You've introduced me in such a beautiful way Line. Line Gauthier May 10, 2018 at 11:40 AM It's fun and inspiring to experiment. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, FJ.

Gershon Wolf May 2, 2018 at 11:02 PM Outstanding, Line! It's a FAVE. Open to so many layers of meaning, and hauntingly beautiful. Bravo! :) gw Line Gauthier May 2, 2018 at 11:08 PM Thank you so much, Gershon. I'm touched.

Caren Krutsinger May 2, 2018 at 10:50 PM I really like this form, and this poem. I am going to try it. Thanks for a wonderful poem and terrific idea, Line. Line Gauthier May 2, 2018 at 11:08 PM Awesome, Caren. I look forward to reading your creation.

Timothy Mcguire May 2, 2018 at 2:33 AM A poet and a sculptor, with words and lines that is... The very sight of this poem shows a firm and intelligent use of words. Good Job! Line Gauthier May 2, 2018 at 11:09 PM Thank you so much, Timothy. It is a fabulous and fun form for sure.

Andrea Dietrich May 1, 2018 at 6:12 PM Oh my gosh, why didn't you tell me you just did one of these? I so rarely see my own form, I nearly don't know the rules of it any more. haha. This is excellent work. FAVE Line Gauthier May 1, 2018 at 10:07 PM Awesome. I was hoping to surprise you without needing to tell you. Surprise!

Besma Riabi Dziri May 1, 2018 at 1:44 PM A poet above the forms! You are challenging your reader with unique write. WEPT remains the prevailing state of ache well depicted in your beauty! Stay bright dear Line. Line Gauthier May 1, 2018 at 2:08 PM Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Besma. Much appreciated.