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She roams cross the land her heart so bitter blue Leaving behind frosty morning dew Icy veil sadly unkept Laden woe upswept She speechless Wept Left dreamless Numb regret windswept No kind soul to intercept Cold bemoaning howling winds a clue She roams cross the land her heart so bitter blue
-andaree form- Submitted on July 7, 2019, for contest VERSE A FAVOURED THEME sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on May 1, 2018

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Date: 7/8/2019 8:39:00 PM
Interesting structure Line for this teary rhyme. Howling winds certainly are a clue. Congrats on your well deserved award. Ambitious verse skillfully penned.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/8/2019 9:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Greg. Not sure what my muse was drinking that night. LOL
Date: 6/3/2018 6:29:00 PM
hello Lin, a beautiful poem. A sad poem of sadness. have a nice evening my friend.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2018 6:58:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Darlene.
Date: 5/29/2018 11:40:00 AM
Lovely, Line-- should definitely be read aloud for its 'music'!
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Date: 5/29/2018 4:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, L.J. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/28/2018 10:40:00 AM
This is beautiful, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2018 2:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dale, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 5/11/2018 5:15:00 PM
Creative form. I can just feel the chills. Nicely done!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/11/2018 7:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Juliet, for your very appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 5/10/2018 5:06:00 AM
Such a great feel for one so alone and hurt.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2018 11:39:00 AM
Thank you for feeling this one. Most appreciated, Charlie.
Date: 5/7/2018 11:11:00 AM
I've never come across this form. You've introduced me in such a beautiful way Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2018 11:40:00 AM
It's fun and inspiring to experiment. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, FJ.
Date: 5/2/2018 11:02:00 PM
Outstanding, Line! It's a FAVE. Open to so many layers of meaning, and hauntingly beautiful. Bravo! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/2/2018 11:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. I'm touched.
Date: 5/2/2018 10:50:00 PM
I really like this form, and this poem. I am going to try it. Thanks for a wonderful poem and terrific idea, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/2/2018 11:08:00 PM
Awesome, Caren. I look forward to reading your creation.
Date: 5/2/2018 2:33:00 AM
A poet and a sculptor, with words and lines that is... The very sight of this poem shows a firm and intelligent use of words. Good Job!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/2/2018 11:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy. It is a fabulous and fun form for sure.
Date: 5/1/2018 6:12:00 PM
Oh my gosh, why didn't you tell me you just did one of these? I so rarely see my own form, I nearly don't know the rules of it any more. haha. This is excellent work. FAVE
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/1/2018 10:07:00 PM
Awesome. I was hoping to surprise you without needing to tell you. Surprise!
Date: 5/1/2018 2:14:00 PM
Really interesting form Line and you’ve made it work so well!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/1/2018 4:24:00 PM
Invented by our most esteemed colleague, Andrea Dietrich.
Date: 5/1/2018 1:44:00 PM
A poet above the forms! You are challenging your reader with unique write. WEPT remains the prevailing state of ache well depicted in your beauty! Stay bright dear Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/1/2018 2:08:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Besma. Much appreciated.