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Wept

she roams cross the land her heart so bitter blue
leaving behind frosty morning dew
icy veil sadly unkept
laden woe upswept
she speechless
wept
left dreamless
numb regret windswept
no kind soul to intercept
cold bemoaning howling winds a clue
she roams cross the land her heart so bitter blue



AP: 2nd place 2020

Submitted on January 22, 2023 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE - ANDAREE sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE -  RANKED 3rd

and July 7, 2019 for contest VERSE A FAVOURED THEME sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

Originally posted on May 1, 2018

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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Sara Kendrick Date: 2/5/2023 11:55:00 PM Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/6/2023 6:13:00 AM Thank you very much, Sara ~

Constance La France Date: 2/4/2023 7:21:00 AM Line, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, Constance Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/5/2023 6:49:00 AM Thank you very much, Constance. Most appreciated ~

Ann Peck Date: 2/2/2023 4:47:00 PM You perfectly paint a picture of a cold and lonely woman! I can see her walking across windswept, barren landscapes. Well done, Line! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/3/2023 12:53:00 PM Thank you very much, Ann. Much appreciated ~

Greg Gaul Date: 7/8/2019 8:39:00 PM Interesting structure Line for this teary rhyme. Howling winds certainly are a clue. Congrats on your well deserved award. Ambitious verse skillfully penned. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/8/2019 9:14:00 PM Thank you so much, Greg. Not sure what my muse was drinking that night. LOL

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/3/2018 6:29:00 PM hello Lin, a beautiful poem. A sad poem of sadness. have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/3/2018 6:58:00 PM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Darlene.

L. J. Carber Date: 5/29/2018 11:40:00 AM Lovely, Line-- should definitely be read aloud for its 'music'! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/29/2018 4:16:00 PM Thank you so much, L.J. Most appreciated.

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 5/28/2018 10:40:00 AM This is beautiful, Line. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/28/2018 2:39:00 PM Thank you so much, Dale, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Juliet Ligon Date: 5/11/2018 5:15:00 PM Creative form. I can just feel the chills. Nicely done! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/11/2018 7:23:00 PM Thank you so much, Juliet, for your very appreciated visit and comment.

Charlie Knowlton Date: 5/10/2018 5:06:00 AM Such a great feel for one so alone and hurt. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/10/2018 11:39:00 AM Thank you for feeling this one. Most appreciated, Charlie.

FJ Thomas Date: 5/7/2018 11:11:00 AM I've never come across this form. You've introduced me in such a beautiful way Line. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/10/2018 11:40:00 AM It's fun and inspiring to experiment. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, FJ.

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/2/2018 11:02:00 PM Outstanding, Line! It's a FAVE. Open to so many layers of meaning, and hauntingly beautiful. Bravo! :) gw Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/2/2018 11:08:00 PM Thank you so much, Gershon. I'm touched.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/2/2018 10:50:00 PM I really like this form, and this poem. I am going to try it. Thanks for a wonderful poem and terrific idea, Line. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/2/2018 11:08:00 PM Awesome, Caren. I look forward to reading your creation.

Timothy Mcguire Date: 5/2/2018 2:33:00 AM A poet and a sculptor, with words and lines that is... The very sight of this poem shows a firm and intelligent use of words. Good Job! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/2/2018 11:09:00 PM Thank you so much, Timothy. It is a fabulous and fun form for sure.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/1/2018 6:12:00 PM Oh my gosh, why didn't you tell me you just did one of these? I so rarely see my own form, I nearly don't know the rules of it any more. haha. This is excellent work. FAVE Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/1/2018 10:07:00 PM Awesome. I was hoping to surprise you without needing to tell you. Surprise!

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/1/2018 1:44:00 PM A poet above the forms! You are challenging your reader with unique write. WEPT remains the prevailing state of ache well depicted in your beauty! Stay bright dear Line. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/1/2018 2:08:00 PM Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Besma. Much appreciated.