Last Rite Exit


Nearing the end of their fleeting days,
short-inhaled lives infirmly await the long dark
Garrulously tilting fermented liquids in a park,
they watch their former youthful ways

Addled memories of a once robust stride
keep the brown paper covered truth hidden well
Selfish pleasures have left their flesh bodies frail,
weary envious exhalation of tearful pride

Uncomfortable thoughts tinge their mind,
feeble resistance offered in boisterous recollections
Never given to ingest any sobering contemplations,
aged souls possessing only wrinkled opine

Cantankerous wrong heights stooped on a bench,
bemoaning last rites of spirits dead long ago since
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May 23, 2018 at 12:46 PM
Now this is one amazing sonnet, your vocabulary is on a different planet...
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May 20, 2018 at 10:26 AM
Only you Freddie could write this Sonnet. Wow!
Turner Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Exquisite poetry, Freddie. Telling it like it is. So wonderful to see you and read you again. i have been missing your poems.
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May 16, 2018 at 5:42 PM
I adore it Freddie. Great sonnet and an instant FAVE. Must read the other part, now.
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May 16, 2018 at 2:15 PM
You've captured the essence of ageing clearly brought out of focus by the drink. Well done, my friend. Your father would be proud.
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May 16, 2018 at 2:12 PM
Nice Addendum tribute Freddie. You have a way with words. :)
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