Do You Want a Tear

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Do you want a tear? Do you want one of mine? I've plenty to share, for tears pool around my heart and linger there. Do you wish someone would shed a tear for you; because in reality, they never do? Do you save a tear? Do you save a tiny tear for you alone; all your grief stored in that drop you call your own? Do you think your heart will carry such a weight or break into fragments, bemoaning life's fate? Do you fear a tear? Do you fear you'll drown in a torrent of pain as the tears spill from your eyes like drops of rain? Do you believe spilling tears makes you look weak; undermining the reputation you seek? Do you hoard a tear? Do you hoard a secret tear, one you won't share; a tiny little drop you've hidden somewhere? Do you silently shed that one single tear; to mourn a lonely life traumatized by fear?

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Date: 5/14/2018 10:21:00 PM
Intriguing questions. Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 5/15/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/5/2016 6:47:00 PM
Trying to hide tears is never a good thing. I say just let it out and let the pain go... A very emotive piece here. Beautifully written, Emile.
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Date: 3/6/2016 7:12:00 AM
Thanks so much Kelly, your input is always most welcome. Emile.
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