Best Amended Poems
Below are the all-time best Amended poems written by Poets on PoetrySoup. These top poems in list format are the best examples of amended poems written by PoetrySoup members
Amended-Van Gogh's 'starry Night'A Van Gogh's "Starry Night"
gamboge moon and stars
dance haloed whirlwind marriage
in violet sky
while black cypress looms
past swirling clouds as fleeting
requiem for love
through bright starry eyes
secluded...
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Categories:
amended, allegory, art, lost love,
Form:
Haiku
PathosNobody observes her leaving her room
wearing just her nightdress and red felt carpet slippers
Shuffling silently she slips out of the front door onto the street
Rivulets...
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Categories:
amended, dark, memory, old, sad,
Form:
Free verse
RESSURECTION AND REBIRTHpoem written for Unseeking Seeker's Awaking from Stupor Contest 1/12/2024
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Something has happened;
something has changed.
Something to portend;
perception exchanged.
A door has been opened;
another has closed.
A feeling amended;
another...
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Categories:
amended, joy, religious, spiritual,
Form:
Quatrain
On Loving the Literary Soup,,When my spirit was fogged in gloom
After i impacted concrete; like a lead balloon
It lifted my strength as I started to write
Of a beautiful girls...
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Categories:
amended, friendship,
Form:
Couplet
I'M Very ThankfulI’m Very Thankful!
I’m very thankful for everything the Lord has made...
Everything he’s created… His beauty is displayed!
I’m very thankful for the breath...
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Categories:
amended, america, faith, god, inspirational,
Form:
Rhyme
Embrace the Line
I do embrace that line, a badge of hope,
which left a shadow of sure death behind.
It represents the power to survive
with feats of expert hands...
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Categories:
amended, blessing, heart, inspirational,
Form:
Blank verse
Animal AnticsA tall giraffe at our local zoo
Got neck ache, (as giraffes often do)
With his neck being so long
The pain was terribly strong...
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Categories:
amended, animal, fantasy, fun, humorous,
Form:
Limerick
Blood SpilledI was born in a life unlike yours;
We have struggled in all the years.
We knocked endlessly but all the doors
Have been closed 'coz of the...
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Categories:
amended, courage, war,
Form:
Free verse
What I Really WantI want to see the America, my grandparents saw;
The promise of freedom, and justice for all.
Where to be an American, a privilege, from "sea to...
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Categories:
amended, political,
Form:
Political Verse
Circadian WobbleCircadian Wobble
Circadian tripped through a trap door
Into amended reality of light and time
Where confusion missteps through the waltz of the hours,
And intervals of minutes
Glare at...
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Categories:
amended, light, time,
Form:
Free verse
The Ballad of Daphne and Jack, the SequelGather 'round me, my dears,
I'll continue the tale
Of a princess and her pirate lover.
Of her crown unencumbered,
They pillaged and plundered
As they wandered the seven seas...
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Categories:
amended, adventure, humor, princess,
Form:
Light Verse
Gran's Last MessageGRAN’S LAST MESSAGE
Seems smelly old Gran wrote a note before she died the second time, it was found on her when the army picked up...
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Categories:
amended, black love, grandmother, writing,
Form:
Epic
Time To SucceedA lot of reasons to cry
A lack of reasons to smile
Shall I cry
Or once again try
My heart is daunting
My mind is pondering
Time has...
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Categories:
amended, 12th grade, 9th grade,
Form:
Couplet
I Got Troubles On My MindThat mean old August sun
he just keeps on beating me down
The heat I am sweating from
makes me look like I have drown
A swig of water...
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Categories:
amended, august, betrayal, longing, prison,
Form:
Rhyme
Where My Soul BelongsWhile a part of my soul longs,
To be carried away,
Far far,
From myself,
To another world,
To a mountain top,
To a lonely place,
To where the air is thin...
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Categories:
amended, identity,
Form:
Free verse