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Amended-Van Gogh's 'starry Night'
A Van Gogh's "Starry Night"

gamboge moon and stars
dance haloed whirlwind marriage
in violet sky

while black cypress looms
past swirling clouds as fleeting
requiem for love

through bright starry eyes
secluded heart still searches
unrequited.

©deborah burch
07/11/2012...

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Categories: amended, allegory, art, lost love,
Form: Haiku
Premium Member Haiku 102 -Amended
tempestuous seas
wild white horses galloping
angry clouds brooding

Haiku 102
Sponsor Nathan D
02~12~16...

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Categories: amended, nature, sea,
Form: Haiku
Premium Member A Dance of Angels Amended
Oppressed by a dark sense of impending doom
A dance of golden angels alight from the clouds
Bursts of shiny, rosy, frothy bubbles clear
Unveiling a lost, now remembered land
Of love and laughter and sparkling stars
            ...

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Categories: amended, angel, uplifting,
Form: Free verse

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry



Pebbles 2 Amended
In the street I found you
oblong pebble
Where did you hail from
an outcrop  or some bizarre barrier reef
I let you chalk 
to all the lost and lonely

I love you like Jah
I cannot bare any flowers in my seed bed
I  lay you in the mud
chlorosis...

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Categories: amended, anger, angst, anxiety,
Form: Free verse
Amended
Jaded is the heart that rests alone 
                                  cadenced, tirelessly out of...

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Categories: amended, happiness, inspirational, heart, heart,
Form: Lyric
Amended Programme
Amended Programme

A lonely note rings out, soft yet clear
Piercing through the deserted landscape
Its tenor wafts over all
Yet none stir at its sorrowful tone

It recalls, all too well, the deafening octaves 
Of a time, so recent, yet wiped away forever
A town indelibly etched in black
To the...

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Categories: amended, angst, conflict, dark, deep,
Form:



Premium Member The Golden Rule Amended
THE GOLDEN RULE-AMENDED

No matter what God you worship…what religion you’ve grown up with 
or you now think is ‘cool’
isn’t it amazing how every religion ever created has in their basic principles…
a form of the Golden Rule?

Yet…we hear stories every day…stories we hope and pray cannot...

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© Jim Yerman  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: amended, happiness,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Automatic Astigmatic Amagmatic Amended Assignment
Automatic Astigmatic Amagmatic Amended Assignment

I was standing on the floor of relief
Yes, I'am living by only God's grace
No matter my placement I'm in agreement
Yes, I shall, I will be a winner in this race

Now to the best of my knowledge
I am incognito
Place my spirit and...

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Categories: amended, celebration, change, hope, how
Form: Free verse

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry