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Jaded is the heart that rests alone 
                                  cadenced, tirelessly out of tune
                                   
                             Audacious is the heart that finds another
                                  captivating, blissfully intoxicated
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 1, 2010 at 9:48 PM
I had to look up some of those words, truly original and very creative!!!
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