Robert Gorelick Poet Free verse

A Dance of Angels Amended

Oppressed by a dark sense of impending doom
A dance of golden angels alight from the clouds
Bursts of shiny, rosy, frothy bubbles clear
Unveiling a lost, now remembered land
Of love and laughter and sparkling stars
                                                            Robert Gorelick

Impressed by their light I walked into the gloaming
A lover eager to find my soulmate in his shroud
Pivotal stars of silver, spangling close and near
The angels have found me dancing in remembered land
across from him I am laughter I am love, I am me
                                                               
                                                             Mystic Rose Rose
Written 6/20/22
Collaborated on 6/27/22


A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Contest
6/28/22

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

I Am Anaya June 28, 2022 at 2:07 PM Back to say a most graceful collaboration, made for each other! Very nice Robert and Mystic Rose ~Anaya Robert Gorelick June 29, 2022 at 6:05 PM A seamless collaboration. Thank you

Victor Buhagiar June 21, 2022 at 5:38 AM A lovely poem. Robert Gorelick June 23, 2022 at 6:29 PM Thank you, Victor. Robert

Kim Rodrigues June 20, 2022 at 6:13 PM Oh how I look forward to that reveal! Wonderful! Robert Gorelick June 23, 2022 at 6:27 PM I'm sure this glory will be revealed to you in its proper time, Kim. Robert

Mystic Rose Rose June 20, 2022 at 4:00 PM I have replied to this beauty Robert Gorelick June 27, 2022 at 8:15 PM I have received your reply and will be happy to add your beautiful addition, Mystic Rose. Robert

Mystic Rose Rose June 20, 2022 at 3:56 PM Oh Robert, you make me long for a longer version of this beauty, nicely penned, thank you Robert Gorelick June 23, 2022 at 6:21 PM I'm pleased that you have shared my vision of transcendence from the darkness into a glorious rejoicing! Robert

Timothy Ray June 20, 2022 at 2:25 PM ahh the quill has walked into the light of memory....great write Robert Gorelick June 23, 2022 at 6:26 PM May you soar into the brightness; memories of Eden, fond forgotten, but found. Robert

I Am Anaya June 20, 2022 at 12:27 PM A splendid transcendence, very nice Robert! You should enter it as a bite size. Robert Gorelick June 23, 2022 at 6:30 PM Your perception is quite cogent, Anaya! Robert