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A Dance of Angels Amended

Oppressed by a dark sense of impending doom A dance of golden angels alight from the clouds Bursts of shiny, rosy, frothy bubbles clear Unveiling a lost, now remembered land Of love and laughter and sparkling stars Robert Gorelick Impressed by their light I walked into the gloaming A lover eager to find my soulmate in his shroud Pivotal stars of silver, spangling close and near The angels have found me dancing in remembered land across from him I am laughter I am love, I am me Mystic Rose Rose Written 6/20/22 Collaborated on 6/27/22 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Contest 6/28/22

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Date: 6/28/2022 2:07:00 PM
Back to say a most graceful collaboration, made for each other! Very nice Robert and Mystic Rose ~Anaya
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/29/2022 6:05:00 PM
A seamless collaboration. Thank you
Date: 6/21/2022 5:38:00 AM
A lovely poem.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/23/2022 6:29:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. Robert
Date: 6/20/2022 6:13:00 PM
Oh how I look forward to that reveal! Wonderful!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/23/2022 6:27:00 PM
I'm sure this glory will be revealed to you in its proper time, Kim. Robert
Date: 6/20/2022 4:00:00 PM
I have replied to this beauty
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/27/2022 8:15:00 PM
I have received your reply and will be happy to add your beautiful addition, Mystic Rose. Robert
Date: 6/20/2022 3:56:00 PM
Oh Robert, you make me long for a longer version of this beauty, nicely penned, thank you
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/23/2022 6:21:00 PM
I'm pleased that you have shared my vision of transcendence from the darkness into a glorious rejoicing! Robert
Date: 6/20/2022 2:25:00 PM
ahh the quill has walked into the light of memory....great write
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/23/2022 6:26:00 PM
May you soar into the brightness; memories of Eden, fond forgotten, but found. Robert
Date: 6/20/2022 12:27:00 PM
A splendid transcendence, very nice Robert! You should enter it as a bite size.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/23/2022 6:30:00 PM
Your perception is quite cogent, Anaya! Robert

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