A Dance of Angels Amended
Oppressed by a dark sense of impending doom
A dance of golden angels alight from the clouds
Bursts of shiny, rosy, frothy bubbles clear
Unveiling a lost, now remembered land
Of love and laughter and sparkling stars
Robert Gorelick
Impressed by their light I walked into the gloaming
A lover eager to find my soulmate in his shroud
Pivotal stars of silver, spangling close and near
The angels have found me dancing in remembered land
across from him I am laughter I am love, I am me
Mystic Rose Rose
Written 6/20/22
Collaborated on 6/27/22
A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Contest
6/28/22
Copyright © Robert Gorelick | Year Posted 2022
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