Admitting Poems


Admitting

It's you who disturb my mind,
The mind might be active in your dreams.
It's you who bring peace to my heart,
Because you grab all my attention into your eyes.

If you lie, then let me completely be in your lie,
But only one lie that I am not yours!—
How faithful your shadow might feel!
That it is attached to
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Categories: admitting, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Free verse

Admitting Immoral Thoughts, Deeds - Metanoia - As Testimony

S Such is our flesh, natural "man"
I In the language of Testaments, we plan
N Not only to enjoy our sins, but confess
    sans decorum and plan

NOTE: Norman Grubb on TESTIMONY advises one ought to confess ones hates and lusts, but in general terms, notvso detailed that hearers and confessor, take delight in
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Categories: admitting, 12th grade, addiction, bible,
Form: Acrostic


Yes, But

Be we stupid or stunningly clever,
be we saintly or bad or whatever,
when admitting we’re wrong,
we will sing the same song.
Its refrain: “I was wrong, yes... however..."
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Categories: admitting, humor, humorous, satire,
Form: Limerick

Admitting Defeat

I’m tired of ironing out the creases 
from the same screwed up old shirt
That you so carelessly sling in the corner
Efforts wasted, 
the metal blisters me with hurt 

I’m tired of hoping the sun still rises
When your storms bring more bad weather 
I’m tired of trying to keep the pages of this book binded
When you
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Categories: admitting, addiction, emotions, marriage, relationship,
Form: Rhyme

About Trump We Must Be Admitting

About Trump We Must Be Admitting

About Trump what we must be admitting;
If his childish behavior he is not quitting;
Big bother be;
No tranquility;
Will need much more aid and babysitting.

Jim Horn

MSNBC and ABC seem to match my way 
of thinking. They represent a combined 
75% of our total population. So guess I
must fit there somewhere.
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Categories: admitting, allegory, analogy,
Form: Limerick


Admitting Than Quitting

Admitting Than Quitting

Was truly my style to start sitting,
While all my bad habits admitting;
Started to count them one by one;
Then when I was finished and done
Them concurrently started quitting.

What else is there left I should say
Should make mine Poem of the Day
And if the day has become bleak
Can also make it Poem of the Week
Have
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Categories: admitting, allegory, analogy, humorous,
Form: Limerick

Admitting Faults

Sometimes I am bothered by the haunted heart in him
He hides the person from deep within,
The kind who fears regret now tries hard -
Defying mistakes as cautioned as he maybe
Disguising loneliness in fraud of falling in love,
He earned his master’s
I've seen him smile without a joy
Those bright eyes, now becomes smoky gray 
Like it left
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Categories: admitting, betrayal, pain, sad love,
Form: Free verse

Double Tetractys-Admitting Mistakes

I
can take
rejections;
revise each line...
and understand what really went wrong.
It would be selfish to expect to win;
yes, they deserve 
the glory... 
no, not
I.
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Categories: admitting, introspection, on writing and
Form: Tetractys
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