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A little quick scribble for Constance La France's Zen, Zinnia, Zepyr contest.

 

Zephyr

Some express their pain,
some sacrifice it for others,
only poets turn it into poetry - (my quote)

Only poets can turn words into poems,
so those who are not poetic
can feel them in a beautiful way.

I'll always hide behind metaphors,
as I'm just a zestful zephyr,
trying to bring calm among 
a tempest of mood swings.

When fate floats like charcoal puffs,
a tender touch helps to release
suppressed drops of sorrow

so I ponder, why I remain
emotionally challenged.

Every night the moon glows among the stars,
but is powerless against them burning away.
I find comfort in knowing some transform
into supernovas, just like ink becoming a poem.

We all crave for enough fuel to keep us alive,
but there is always that unfinished thought,
which suffers from a premature end.

When I'm lost in a land of windstorms,
I yearn to have the strength of Zephyrus,
hoping my soft whispers are not 
misunderstood among self centred gusts.

I'll always be an atonement of nature,
as everything I long to do is a curse of selflessness.
Sunrise is the most stunning 'hello,'
whilst sunset is the most magnificent 'goodbye.'
But you are never guaranteed daydreams at dawn,
nor clarity of compassion at dusk,
so I'll keep blowing like a gentle breeze,
as no matter in which direction the winds blow,
I'll keep hope in finding a way home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Manassian Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 12:03 AM
Unfinished thoughts that have a premature end really resonated with me. So many of those... that could have become poems if we had let them. Loved that first stanza.... makes so much sense. Poets are fortunate as they are able to turn those feelings into poetry.
Kulkarni Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 8:58 AM
Very beautifully expressed emotions Silent One! Reading your poem felt like a zephyr to me. -Smita
Manley Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 10:48 AM
I think I am attracted most to the emotionally challenged who pen out their thoughts here. Your thoughts as you work through your emotions help make some of my own more clear. I just realized I have lost the art of progression on the day and the feeling of accomplishment in the night. I used to make a to do list and mow it to set things right. ( and yeah I write poems in my comments... so Sue me!) You inspired it! Thanks for the inspiration
Beaufort Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 12:25 PM
Silent one, your words are like a gentle wind. You have a lot of beautiful ideas and images that can inspire readers such as yours truly. How lucky we are that you are here!
George Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 6:29 AM
A lovely write dear Silent. "Only poets can turn words into poems, so those who are not poetic can feel them in a beautiful way." This is one of the few truths we have in this world. If only we could see the scars and marks on the Poetry it would so deep it swallows. Congratulations.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 2:23 PM
Back with Congratulations on another "Zephyr" win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write again. Have a blessed weekend..................
Puddifoot Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 11:48 AM
i enjoyed this piece and the analogies within it, particularly the latter part, strong closing lines - congrats on your placement in the contest, and thanks for your commentary on my work :)
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 10:31 AM
- Congratulations once again, S.O. :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
La France Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 7:20 PM
Silent, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent poem, I love thevmusic too, Constance
M  Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations S.O on POTD! Captivating write! Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 9:40 AM
Love verse 3. … When fate floats like charcoal puffs… but there is always that unfinished thought, which suffers from a premature end…lovely sunrise and sunset thoughts. Hugs ~ Kim Congrats on POTD!
Kaufman Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 12:10 AM
Hi Silent One, Back to congratulate you on this wonderful POTD write! It resonates with soul as so many of your prior pennings Blessings to you..
George Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 8:42 PM
"I'm just a zestful zephyr, trying to bring calm among a tempest of mood swings." What a beautiful metaphoric poem. "I yearn to have the strength of Zephyrus, hoping my soft whispers are not misunderstood among self centred gusts." This highly reflective poem stands apart in sobriety, beauty and profundity. Amazing talent dear Silent One. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD
Buehler Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 8:23 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Silent One. Your poem is magnificent! :)
Emate Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 7:39 PM
Congratulations Silent One on your POTD. An enjoyable read.
Baker Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 6:37 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Silent One! A comforting poem, full of compassion and hope for each reader. Thank you for blessings us with your poetry, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
Kaufman Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 4:29 PM
Dear Silent One, Congratulations on this soulful penning. It's depth has many layers and I had to read it twice to process it fully. A wonderful write.. Blessings to your poet soul..
Nicole Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 2:31 PM
' A zestful zephyr among the stars. ' An inspiring moment indeed, and I can relate. Emotions are expressed through poetic rhyme and structured syllable count. Such a tender and beautiful way to share thoughts from the heart. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 2:17 PM
Congratulations on your POTD honour, Dear So. Spiritual, philosophical, profound - I would like to say about this poem. Every line is stunning, the ending definitely carries optimism "as no matter in which direction the winds blow, I'll keep hope in finding a way home."
Bowring Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 2:07 PM
Many congratulations dear SO. There is much to admire here. ‘ Trying to bring calm among a tempest of mood swings’ ‘ just like ink becoming a poem’ A very well written and reflective read from your artistic, golden pen. I love your profound quote too. Thank you for sharing your immense talent and also your valued continuous support to us all. Blessings to you.
Anaya Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on POTD! "Only poets can turn words into poems, so those who are not poetic can feel them in a beautiful way" this is you and I, Silent One. Love for your captivating poetry, brings every sense and every emotion out in us~happiness is real poetry ~Anaya
Slaughter Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 10:46 AM
And I'm sure you'll do just that, S O. I love what you say about "sunrise" and "sunset". A great piece for POTD.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 9:47 AM
A wonderful creative write Silent One, love every word and line. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 9:14 AM
Back with Congratulation on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write again. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........................
Roper Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day my friend well deserved.
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