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Poor little Zena zebra was feeling oh so sad She was born an albino, which made her look bad Zena desperately wanted to fit in with the others And have a stripy body like her sisters and brothers Zena thought hard and came up with a cunning plan She would paint some stripes, so she’d have great élan Zena went shopping in a local hardware store Bought some black paint for the stripes she’d adore Her stripes were brushed on by a trusted friend But quickly the can of paint came to an end Sadly Zena hadn’t got any more money Her half painted body looked rather funny How the other zebra’s laughed at poor Zena They called her names; they couldn’t be meaner But good luck was on little Zena’s side that day The rain lashed down and washed the paint away For Zena had purchased watercolour paint Now Zena’s back to white and she has no complaint She stands out in the crowd because she is unique Yes she’s different from the others but her look is oh so chic Zena stands proudly in her white coat which shines so bright She is delighted to say not everything in life is black and white Moral of the story it is our differences that make us unique A delightful Children’s fable Contest Sponsored by Carol Eastman. Submitted to z contest old or new Sponsored by Constance La France 07~10~16

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Date: 12/11/2021 2:30:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your First Place win in my "Z" Contest. The story of Zena the zebra is truly delightful ~ love and serenity _ Constance
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Date: 12/9/2021 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your "ZEALOUS ZENA ZEBRA" write and picture. "Soooooo Cute" Have a blessed day................
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Date: 12/8/2021 4:48:00 PM
Cute picture, Jan, enjoyed Zena's story, she is unique. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest. Hugs and lots of Love Eve
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Date: 9/1/2016 12:59:00 AM
When my daughter was getting grief at school during her Goth phase, she wore a T-shirt that said 'You laugh at me because I'm different- I laugh at you because you're all the same'. Congrats on a great win, Jan. Viv x
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Date: 8/31/2016 2:25:00 PM
Good story, Jan. It reminds me of a fairytale from my childhood -- actually, there are a ton of children's books using that very same, popular theme. Congrats!
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Date: 7/18/2016 1:56:00 PM
I love the moral to the story, Jan and I delightfully loved this poem. It made me smile. Even as old as I am, I love a good story. Awesome write! Wishing you the best in the contest! A (7) for me and a fav of course. Hugs, Sharon : )
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Date: 8/25/2016 1:08:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Sharon - sorry I'm late in replying ... I wish soup would bring back notifications on all comments:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/14/2016 6:47:00 AM
Indeedy, Jan, very true. A fun write, should do well, and quite emulsional, too. Viv x
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Date: 7/14/2016 7:11:00 AM
Thanks Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/13/2016 5:34:00 PM
Great Message, fantastic poem..
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/15/2016 8:05:00 PM
You're a great story teller...
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Date: 7/14/2016 3:04:00 AM
Thanks Pashang:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 5:48:00 PM
Such a creative poem, and wonderful message.
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Date: 7/11/2016 5:52:00 PM
Thanks Arthur I do enjoy this type of challenge and have written several animal stories for children most of them have a message they can learn from:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/10/2016 7:57:00 PM
Jan, you are so creative this is a wonderful story with a great plot. 100% girl. Good luck in the contest in which it is a hit now. :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/11/2016 5:19:00 AM
Thanks Eve I really enjoy writing these animal stories I have written about 6 others:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/10/2016 5:31:00 PM
You did fantastic!!! Jan, I hope this scores very well!!
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Date: 7/10/2016 5:41:00 PM
Thanks Andrea its ages since I've written one of my animal poems and I really had fun with this one:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/10/2016 4:26:00 PM
Great children's poem Jan, imaginative and with a moral too? What better name for a zebra that one that starts with z. All the best, Regards, Craig
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Date: 7/10/2016 4:35:00 PM
Thanks Craig I've written several children's poems Sammy starfish, Percy penguin, Olly owl,Lenny the Lizard - I love the alliteration with the names:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/10/2016 4:23:00 PM
yes, so true - loved this sweet write x
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Date: 7/10/2016 4:33:00 PM
Thanks Jack I had fun writing for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/10/2016 3:25:00 PM
Felt sad for Zena? or Zena Zebra? the poem was quite visual without a lot of brain activity. Flows well. Beautiful!
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Date: 7/10/2016 3:34:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Darren - she's just Zena who happens to be a Zebra - i like the alliteration of the z lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/10/2016 2:47:00 PM
How true. Our differences are what make us unique.Love the tale Jan.
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Daniel I had fun writing for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/10/2016 2:18:00 PM
- A delightful story that both large and small children can learn something from - Well done and good luck in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise I had fun writing for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/10/2016 2:08:00 PM
Lovely children's moral story, Jan. I like the humour as well. Good luck with the contest. Barry.
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Barry I had fun with the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/10/2016 2:02:00 PM
Hi Jan, I enjoyed reading your well written tale. It flows in style, rhyme and content. Great moral as well. I agree our differences is what makes us unique. It looks like a winner to me.Best of luck in the contest .A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:05:00 PM
Thanks so much for being the first to comment Alexis I did have fun writing the poem I hope Carol likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

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