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Youth

I am no longer in my youth, it has flown the coop, my bones, and joints won’t listen to my commands. I spend most of my days picking up dog poop. Don't get me wrong I'm happy to be in my age group, I must admit I'm not fond of these wild grey strands. I am no longer in my youth, it has flown the coop. Sometimes I play bingo with an amazing silver troop, but I miss dancing to live music and big bands. I spend most of my days picking up dog poop. Or talking to my friend Flo who gives me the scoop, I long to take several trips to faraway lands. I am no longer in my youth, it has flown the coop. As I sit daydreaming, I snap to; hubby is a big snoop What am I to do when life and age make demands? I spend most of my days picking up dog poop. In the end, I feel youthful although I can’t hula hoop, I'm ok as I stare at these wrinkled old hands. I am no longer in my youth, it has flown the coop, I spend most of my day picking up dog poop. 05/4/2023 Contest: “Y” Challenge Words Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 5/11/2023 10:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in the Contest...My friend. This one is an amazing .... I did not feel to finish reading. I got this " There is time for everything on earth."
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:39:00 PM
Back with BIG congrats on your TOP win, Alexis.
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:28:00 PM
Alexis, CONGRATS on your win. This poem REALY resonates with me! Janice
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:12:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Alexis :) - hugs
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:08:00 PM
Alexis, Your poetry "Youth" is fantastic. From the first page to the last, I was engrossed. I am happy for you and congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/11/2023 10:47:00 AM
Dancing never goes out of style Alexis, Being young at heart is what matters, Lovely write, Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/11/2023 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A  fun/creative write. Love your ending. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 5/11/2023 7:09:00 AM
Alexis, thank you for sharing your fun poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:25:00 AM
Just adorable. Love it. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 5/6/2023 1:57:00 PM
LOL very funny write.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 5/6/2023 2:40:00 PM
Hi Nancy, I'm glad you noticed the humor. I appreciate that you stopped by. Enjoy your day and weekend:-) Alexis
Date: 5/6/2023 7:37:00 AM
:) ... I pick up dog poop too ... :) ... but, you have to be a bit fit for this task ... it always lies on the ground :) - The years go by ... and the joints are not what they used to be - Still reading this with a smile, Alexis :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 5/5/2023 9:16:00 PM
Great Villanelle. I am not at all proficient in writing poems beloning to this genre. I am most comfortable with free verse. I really enjoyed reading your poem, dear Alexis. Though youth is gone, you seem to embrace life with a sportive spirit. All the best in the contest, dear friend.
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Date: 5/5/2023 7:58:00 PM
Many of us can sure relate. Except the picking up dog’s poop. I have no dog. Lol. Great write, Alexis. And best of luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 5/5/2023 1:37:00 PM
I couldn't hula hoop when I was young. LOL..So no problem there. I understand the problems of aging and sympathize with you in some of the aspects. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 5/5/2023 12:08:00 PM
Yes, getting older is a pain, literally a pain, bending in slow motion is sometimes comical, and walking with sore knees is the joy of my day...welcome to O...L...D
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Date: 5/5/2023 8:24:00 AM
Very well done, Alexis:)
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Date: 5/5/2023 5:27:00 AM
Excellent poem, Alexis. Wonderfully introspective write.
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Date: 5/4/2023 6:46:00 PM
How much are you spending on dog poop these days, by the way, Alexis?! lol. ~ Keen Sense of Smell
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Date: 5/4/2023 8:42:00 PM
Too many lol!
Date: 5/4/2023 4:13:00 PM
Excellent Villanelle, Alexis, I enjoy your thoughts on aging. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill
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Date: 5/4/2023 3:59:00 PM
Great poem, Alexis. You conveyed stunning imagery with your well-picked words. Best wishes for the contest and thanks for dropping by my page and for the fine comment.
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Date: 5/4/2023 2:25:00 PM
Alexis, there are worse things in life that we must do other than pick up dog poop. It means you have pup to love, and one that surely loves you. Well written in message and form.
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