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You'Re No Shakespeare

With pastel shades of rose, yellow and peach, a poet paints with his words, a sunrise until the voice of a muse starts to preach, "Observe it from my more creative eyes." Suggestions planted; seeds of doubt were sown for the proper hues of a sandy shore. Foiled poet versus a Muse on her throne. Balls of crumpled pages, flung to the floor. Her clicking tongue whispers in the poet's ear, destroying thoughts he had captured in rhyme. "I see I've work to do. You're no Shakespeare." Each line scribed, a ladder's rung worth the climb. Sonnet penned with an infusion of spice when a muse beggars to proffer advice. August 22, 2020 Pareidolia Poetry Contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish

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Date: 8/28/2020 8:32:00 AM
So well articulated, Jenna - a most familiar experience for all of us who write. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2020 4:53:00 AM
I fear we have all suffered, or been fortunate to have a muse whisper in our ear, or kick the chair from under us with better thoughts. lol Thank you, Sam.
Date: 8/27/2020 6:06:00 PM
You are! with an almighty pen, and a wondrous mind. Congratulations. Stay safe..Harry
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/28/2020 3:52:00 AM
Hardly, but thanks for the thought, Harry.
Date: 8/22/2020 2:03:00 PM
Despite my late wife's DNA, I never was a Shakespeare fan, but I remain one of yours, so never be discouraged! Aloha! Rico
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/23/2020 7:54:00 AM
What a lovely comment, Rico. Thanks so much.
Date: 8/22/2020 1:46:00 PM
Im sure Will would give the thumbs up to this one Jenna. I live not far from where he lived at Stratford on Avon, a beautiful town. Good luck Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/22/2020 1:57:00 PM
Oh, lucky you, Tom. What a historical place. I'm so envious, and thank you for leaving your comments.
Date: 8/22/2020 12:47:00 PM
Another great write Jenna, outstanding diction and phraseology, but, that's what we've become accustomed to right? Craig will love this I sense another winner on the horizon!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/27/2020 7:46:00 PM
haha... You were right again, John! Thanks!
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/27/2020 6:12:00 PM
So what did I say? On the short list of winners, congrats well deserved.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/22/2020 1:58:00 PM
Thanks so very much for the generous remarks, John. I've no knowledge of Craig's likes or dislikes, but I will trust in your theory. ;)
Date: 8/22/2020 11:57:00 AM
This is beautifully done; I am so aware of those "balls of crumpled pages" there are actually six of them at my feet right now and more in the garbage next to the ones that missed. Perfect.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/22/2020 2:00:00 PM
I've saving trees when I'm near enough to my computer to keep an open poetry file. lol I've had quite a few 'flinging paper parties.' Thank you, Caren.
Date: 8/22/2020 10:07:00 AM
Jenna, an inspired poem here! Well paced, really good premis. Lovely language, vivid references. A sure Winner!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/22/2020 10:52:00 AM
Sigrid, I appreciate your encouraging thoughts. Thanks!

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