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Your Words He…, put me on the ground. He yelled. He screamed. Sometimes… he was obscene. I walked on. I wanted to live, the perfect life. The picket fence, and no strife. Two kids, a yard, a house. A mouse in the kitchen, a cat in the yard, happy. You talked of killing me. You openly displayed, your hostility, and I stupidly, let you stay… on. I should have shown you the door. I should have told you before. I don’t want you anymore, you are not the man I knew, you are only his echo. The return of that sound, is less and less, now only a few… and then gone.

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Date: 12/9/2019 3:37:00 PM
So brave and inspiring, a powerful write, Ann-
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Date: 12/9/2019 4:00:00 PM
Ty friend. Merry Christmas. Ann
Date: 12/9/2019 1:57:00 PM
An analogy of a life's orderliness to a picket fence is great! I'm a little jealous)
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Date: 12/9/2019 3:26:00 PM
Hehe... I love picket fences, gardens, ponds and skipping stones, just before dusk wins and dark consumes the very air. Hugs for your day... Merry Christmas. Ty for you kind words. You are a real vet, so they mean a lot. Ann
Date: 12/9/2019 1:06:00 PM
Good one! I made him eat his...has been choking ever since! :)
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Date: 12/9/2019 3:24:00 PM
Everything gets stuck at least for a while... :) hehe... Yet, thinking less of him, forgiving and letting it fall away.. has helped. That does not mean he is anywhere around... Have a truly lovely Christmas. You write true and honest words, that is so cool. Ann
Date: 12/9/2019 12:07:00 PM
So glad you no longer put up with this kind of insane selfishness! Glad you have made an escape.
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Date: 12/9/2019 3:22:00 PM
A getaway... that is still on the run at times. But, I have found angels and friends... like you on both accounts... that make life better day by day... God give you a lovely afternoon. Ann
Date: 12/9/2019 8:20:00 AM
Ann! What a powerful poem and so well written A FaV. Panagiota
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Ann Foster
Date: 12/9/2019 8:40:00 AM
You are ever the kindest... Merry Christmas... hugs... Ann

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