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Smile weaved on your bright face moonbeam lattice, set rare rhythm of rhapsody in my heart. I travelled on stardust drenched lonely path with lost gem’s glint, and walk now the last mile.
October 8, 2020 Syllable count : 1/2/3/4/10/10/4/3/2/1 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Double Tetractys 4 Sponsor : Eve Roper

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Date: 10/17/2020 2:52:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful in the depth and breadth of emotion and imagery expressed in so few words. Congratulations, Subimal, for your excellent win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/16/2020 8:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on a lovely 2nd place in the contest, Subimal :) - Have a nice weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/15/2020 7:26:00 PM
Another nice Subimal. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/15/2020 6:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal. Thank you for participating in my Tetractys contest. Hugs Eve
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