Your Final Journey - Emotive Write
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FICTION WRITE FOR CONTEST
Salty tears fell from my blue eyes, when I kissed you goodbye
I begged please don’t drive till sunrise, when I kissed you goodbye
Soft snowflakes were falling from the sky, but you weren’t deterred -
You’d promised that you’d meet the guys, when I kissed you goodbye
You replied that you’d be fine, as it wasn’t far to go
I told you that it wasn’t wise, when I kissed you goodbye
We exchanged harsh words that terrible night; you told me that
it’s not my place to criticise, when I kissed you goodbye
Your car skidded on ice; a policeman came to my door.
I’d been so right to agonise, when I kissed you goodbye
As I sat by your bedside on the night you passed away
my sadness I could not disguise, when I kissed you goodbye
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Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2017
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