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Your Favorite Song - You and Me

Oh that’s you and me “You and me were always with each other, before we knew the other was ever there” Destiny carves its path through lives, filling needs unknown until it happens Bridging gaps of empty terrain where love belongs eventually as our hearts wait for that one we feel on the journey “You and me we belong together, just like a breath needs the air” So many comparisons play, moving pieces to spaces, uncovered Sliding down chutes, climbing ladders, sensing that something waits, something good Inspired to keep going, following the lines drawn in tingles on skin “I told you if you called I would come runnin’, across the highs the lows and the in betweens” You’ve taken my hand and showed me things are not always as they seem Until you find them in your shadow, lifting you when you fall, caressing your soul in unexplained notions, safety and comfort with merely a touch “You and me we’ve got two minds that think as one and our hearts march to the same beat” Your eyes, my eyes, we see similar patterns curving about skylines of melodic tempos As we walk together, one step after the other, but two steps always for the other in whatever direction they choose, syncopated movements hand in hand ”They say everything it happens for a reason, you can be flawed enough but perfect for a person” These scars of past seasons, cold winds blow across arid deserts of details and misgivings Cloaked in love’s blanket, accepted beyond yesterdays Put away in box with a lock, no key is available and neither would want it anyway ”Someone who will be there for you when you fall apart, guiding your direction when you’re riding through the dark” This light that leads, from your smile, your understanding, your acceptance that I reflect back as a mirror Enhancing the beam of this forever feeling, Strolling down avenues of pleasure for happiness is always a two way street ”Oh that’s you and me…” 4/4/17 The italicized lines are lyrics from one of my favorite songs, “You and Me” by Pink and Dallas Green off the Rose Ave album. https://youtu.be/TUYleIXgceQ For the “Your Favorite Song” poetry contest Sponsored by: Alexis Y.

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Date: 5/24/2017 5:19:00 PM
Lovely heartfelt poem, Chris. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/24/2017 5:22:00 PM
Thanks so much Carole. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 5/24/2017 11:09:00 AM
Hi Chris, I really enjoyed the song you chose. I enjoyed your poem as well. It would be wonderful to have someone in your life like this. Nice job incorporating the lyrics into the poem. It was just what I was looking for. Thanks for participating in my" Your Favorite Song" contest. Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis PS, I like Pink because she has great voice and she is so versatile.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/24/2017 11:20:00 AM
Thanks so very much Alexis. It was a fun contest and I am honored to have won a spot in it. And you are correct, she is amazing.
Date: 5/23/2017 5:33:00 PM
Reading this was such a pleasure Chris, I had to listen to the song, then buy the CD. Both so beautifully done.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/23/2017 5:35:00 PM
Wow, thanks so much Jean. I am so thrilled you enjoyed this poem. That song is truly one of my favorites. It holds a special meaning for me. Thank you again for your kindness.
Date: 5/23/2017 1:00:00 PM
Congratulation Chris, so very well crafted...
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Chris Green
Date: 5/23/2017 1:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Charlie.
Date: 4/28/2017 8:39:00 PM
Hello Chris, good luck in the contest. This is a beautiful poem. It made me feel happiness. A 7 I am glad that the song makes you smile. A 7 Love And hugs.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so very much Darlene. I am happy this poem makes you happy. I like making people smile. This song has a special meaning for me and will always be one of my favorite songs.
Date: 4/28/2017 1:10:00 AM
This my favorite poem you wrote so far. It is fragrant and elegant. like an opening rosebud .kissing the morning dew. with tender pedals. carressing sunshine. releasing meaning. regrowing anew. a loves sweet bloom. Magnificent Chris Green . Brilliantly penned.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/28/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thanks so very much Heidi. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 4/24/2017 9:58:00 PM
Heard the song yesterday, I knew Pink has some pipes but was nicely surprised by Dallas Green (any relation?) didn't think so, any way what a wonderful song, and a wonderful poem, should do well in the contest. cold winds blow across arid deserts of details and misgivings, WOW pure genius!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 8:13:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. It is cool song and one I have enjoyed since I first heard it. I appreciate your nice comments.
Date: 4/5/2017 11:55:00 AM
Dear Chris. The whole concept is meaningless and pointless if it isn't a two way street. You have chosen a wonderful song. Your thoughts and words enhance it. I too just joined in. Allow me to say good luck with the contest. I can see how the song has meaning. Enjoy the afternoon. Well done entirely.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so very much Lisa, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much. I just love that song and I saw that you entered and I think I forgot to say good luck in the contest to you, but I don't think you need any luck, your poem was a definite winner in my opinion.
Date: 4/4/2017 10:26:00 PM
That's a beautiful song Chris, and I loved the way you wove some of the song's lyrics into the fabric of your gorgeous poem. Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:38:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Marie. Your nice comments are a beautiful song to me and one of my favorites as well. :) I appreciate your visits my friend.
Date: 4/4/2017 2:22:00 PM
Following the lines drawn in tingles on skin/Your eyes my eyes-Now that is beautiful..and so many other exceptional lines...How beautiful this is. One of my fave songs is 'The One' by Sir Elton John, and another fave is Hello'by Lionel Ritchie,There id 'Vivo per Lei ' by Andrea Bocelli,I love Robbie Williams,and 'She believes in me' by Kenny Rogers...I do love Adele and Celiene Dion as well.Your poem is: A definite Fave, and beautiful song.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I am familiar with some of the songs you mentioned but not all of them, though I am sure they are all beautiful if you like them. I appreciate you Charmaine and all of the kindness you always leave for me to find.
Date: 4/4/2017 1:46:00 PM
- Oh ... what a wonderful song, Chris - A fantastic impressive poems - Hope I'm allowed to fav. this ... - !!! "They say everything it happens for a reason, you can ask flawed enough but perfect for a person "!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/4/2017 1:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed the song and the poem.
Date: 4/4/2017 1:08:00 PM
I listened, and I love it. Wonderful how you worked those lines in between your own poem, and the whole is simply amazing.That stanza with "That scars of past seasons...." is absolutely gorgeous, and it's true too. Put away in a box with a lock... Good luck in the contest my friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/4/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Darren. I really appreciate you stopping by, listening to the song and then leaving such kind thoughts about my poem. I am thrilled you liked this one my friend.
Date: 4/4/2017 12:21:00 PM
I haven't listened to the song yet but I will. Great poem Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/4/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thank you so very much Elizabeth. I hope you like the song when you hear it.
Date: 4/4/2017 11:09:00 AM
Lovely write Chris, my interest is piqued. xomo!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/4/2017 11:26:00 AM
Thanks so very much Maureen. I am happy you stopped by.
Date: 4/4/2017 11:04:00 AM
A beautiful song..i had to go listen...to have someone like that is divine
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Chris Green
Date: 4/4/2017 11:26:00 AM
Thanks so very much Tim. I'm glad you enjoyed the song, it really is one of my faves and every time I hear it, the memories it creates really makes me smile.

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