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Your Attention Please

Bees declining numbers Singing at sweet flower throats Stings a reminder

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Sean Kelly

Date: 6/30/2009 9:30:00 AM

Well done , " Honey " . Tks for your nectar words ....

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/27/2009 9:47:00 PM

Rose have thorns and honey comes with stings ... all beauty has a price ... so this poem is the only priceless beauty. Bravo

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 6/26/2009 8:14:00 PM

BUUUUUZZZZZZZ! Very nice. Bravo. Ernilando

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/18/2009 11:36:00 PM

Dear Barbeeg Barbara, Great Haiku I thought YOU said YOU could not think of any thing to write about This is Superb LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Donna Golden

Date: 6/18/2009 11:21:00 AM

Looks like everyone is simply "buzzing" over this poem! Nice piece, Barbara! Nothing like fresh honey! (p.s) I like to watch the bees at work in my garden...the bumblebees especially love my purple flowers! Donna

James Fraser

Date: 6/18/2009 10:51:00 AM

Great Haiku Barbara, nicely crafted. Thank you so much for your kind comments>>James

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/17/2009 2:20:00 PM

so creative you are-the sting is always a reminder,even when flowers bloom in dreams--beautiful--good reminder,good way of getting our attention,clever you are my dear friend--------charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/17/2009 9:53:00 AM

Yes, the "sting" gives me chills when I think of the consequences. Why is it everything that promotes beauty seems to be endangered right now? You have my attention, Barbara! Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 6/17/2009 6:16:00 AM

Super haiku, Barb! Lots of mind- stingers in this one. Thanks for reading Grump and the stump. Love, daver

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/16/2009 5:48:00 PM

Lovely haiku....unique eye "at the flower throats"...unusual description, well done! ~Love, Carrie

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/16/2009 5:39:00 PM

Great Haiku...especially the mid-verse. Beautiful imagery! Thank you for commenting on my Fingerprints poem. A most unusual comment, but the point definatley got across! LOL. Thank you, ~Trudy~

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/16/2009 4:54:00 PM

singing at sweet flower throats...wonderful to see..very good haiku.

C. E. Mcmullin

Date: 6/16/2009 4:48:00 PM

Bumblebee stings are my favorite, always a cure for my human arrogance- Great write! poet butterfly

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/16/2009 4:35:00 PM

Congrads on your win for "My Privelege" Nice thoughtful haiku! Light & Love

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/16/2009 4:29:00 PM

i don't need any kind of reminder like that. i've had them. john

Date: 6/16/2009 4:08:00 PM

Cute poem. Haven't seen much of bees or butterflies in these last couple of years. Both are fascinating insects--though I stay away from the stings. Keep on writing! Karen