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Young Again

YOUNG AGAIN
I looked into the mirror yesterday And in it saw the ravages of time. Tired eyes and hair that long since turned to grey, So many years since I was in my prime. I felt despair; how quickly time had flown. So much undone that now would never be. And then your face appeared beside my own; I had not noticed you were watching me. I studied your reflection so serene; And saw your eyes still full of tenderness Just as they were when you were sweet sixteen. Your fingers brushed my cheek, a brief caress But in that moment I was free of pain; The darkness lifted, I was young again. 7th June 2019 2019 Best Sonnet Contest Sponsor John Hamilton

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Date: 1/1/2020 1:37:00 PM
This is a great write Bryn, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 6/8/2019 2:15:00 PM
Bryn, this is awesome. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 6/8/2019 1:43:00 PM
Oh that's so sweet, Bryn and as usual you have honed the rhythm and rhyme to perfection. I really enjoy reading your poetry. Best wishes Wendy
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 6/8/2019 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Wendy. That's so kind

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