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i am here to let your words make love to me i am here to bury my face deep in your poetry to let your haiku  molest my naked body shake me like a tree can you read the want in my hips for your metaphors and similes? like an African lion in heat i long your letters  how they hug tightly only to entice my desire. the child in me wants to explore, journey tender the skin  you wear. so don't leave me to play alone in the sandbox. let me run the body of your work free. ingest your verse and also grow wings. you and i flying as one in a mad fancy. then maybe send in my bed sheets - both single with your personifications they'll jump rope and after exercising go for a cup of hope at the outdoor cafe where poets mingle    i am only here because your couplets are wooing me. i want to glide - baby oil - body on body - chummy.   not compete but instead massage your triolets, fraternize with your sonnets. your tanka rocks me mountains baby smooth to climb it's quite the challenge one i'm willing to take on you're the baby smooth i want i'll ride your majestic rhymes dream they'll settle for, this my smiling core, stay with me at bedtimes. you - the poetess that defines my nights i want you to know i climb every evening  towards the peak where your words spike. i'll never be the poet you are, but i have my hands and other parts that could drive you to ecstasy. .........you'll see it's my specialty. 01~01~2015 Armand Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Contest Name: First poem of 2015

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Date: 5/1/2015 11:04:00 PM
a belated congrats here for you. I don't think I gave one before and also came here to say I miss you. I think you are preoccupied this week and I hope to hear from you soon.
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Date: 3/23/2015 6:26:00 PM
Maurice, congratulations on your fine win with this wonderfully written poem, I like the feel of the lower case letters, it adds something to the poem, a perfect 7 . . .
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:51:00 AM
You wooed the muse with passionate words and won her heart. A bonus you were given, and that's top accolade! Congratulations, Armand! Hugs and smiles! 7++++++and a favvvvvvv:) Kim
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Date: 3/22/2015 9:50:00 AM
Top marks for this expressive write that seeps passion, coming from a capable pen indeed! Well done and congratulations on placing first, Armand! #7 // paul
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Date: 3/22/2015 9:48:00 AM
I am honored to share first with such a brilliant poet, congratulations my friend!
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Date: 3/22/2015 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win, Maurice! This piece was enthralling to read. I enjoyed every line. Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 3/21/2015 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome first place win. it's an amazing write and you know it... Maurice, stop by my latest blog "Old Men In Blue Jeans" if you'd like... Always~ LINDA
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Date: 1/8/2015 12:11:00 PM
Fantastic, sensual creativity Maurice, leaving the reader transfixed with your words, wow factor, very HIGH - James :)
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Date: 1/7/2015 1:41:00 AM
Named i meant not bamed :) oops
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Date: 1/7/2015 1:38:00 AM
You never cease to amaze me with your creative style,as if you're making love to the poetess bamed literature itself.Ow dare i?Another fav. : ).
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Date: 1/6/2015 1:41:00 AM
Maurice, I love it in every way!! a fave for me.. :)! A7 and more!
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Date: 1/4/2015 8:47:00 AM
Pretty impressive way to start the year Maurice!
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Date: 1/3/2015 3:38:00 PM
wow, you plucked this from the heart, Maurice... truly enchanting down to the marrow of your pen!.. huggs
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Date: 1/3/2015 3:36:00 PM
Maurice, you do write with such passion and your poetry is amazing.
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Date: 1/3/2015 3:31:00 AM
Passionate..Sara Thanks for dropping by..
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Date: 1/2/2015 7:46:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work this evening. Happy New Year Armand ;) Light & Love
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:45:00 PM
Poetry can bring us pleasure in so many ways. Whether, we are in control of the words as we write or leaving it up to someone else as we read. It can be very addictive... Your passion for the craft is clearly evident in the creative poem. A terrific write, Maurice!
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:19:00 PM
I'm noticing the review by this new poet James you told us about. If his poetry is as interesting as the way he leaves his comments, I think I will enjoy reading him too. Let me go see!!
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:18:00 PM
WOW, hot hot hot!!! Armand, I love all the many metaphors that you employed in this sensuous poem! That was really cute the cup of hope rhyme with jump rope and there were other lines like that one which just jumped out at me with your originality. you are a one of a kind, Armand! Your creativity knows no bounds, and I am thankful in this new year to know such a magical, talented poet as you!
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Date: 1/2/2015 12:41:00 PM
Wow WOW WOW isn't she one hell of a lucky lady Armand!!! amazing imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 8:55:00 AM
What a lovely, flirtatious poem. The various changing forms lend structure to the wooing of the poetess, and the sensuous nature of the poem, its overriding theme, is undiminished by the creative employment of the number of poetic devises. Powerful. Aggressive. Singular. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:48:00 AM
This was just sensually riveting.....yes...riveting. Good luck.
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