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You Saw Me- the Real Me

my path was leading toward and isle of perpetual sorrow i suffered in silence- (endless weeping) but i am a wounded woman craving remedies... always listening carefully for voices to ease my need for peace ~ -YOU SAVED ME THAT NIGHT- bestowed an innocence i was craving, gave a mile when an inch was needed for you are my immortal salvation, the epitome of redemption; i am lost in the sorrow of letting go, yet grateful for the threshold to happiness ~a threshold you built by hand~ a myriad of emotions flow, and time stands alone with the ineffable stars whispering “i love you…” and... i love you too i saw black and you saw me for the peace you gave set me free
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1.1.20

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Date: 1/3/2020 1:26:00 PM
Laura again I knew you'd place high congrats!;)
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Date: 1/1/2020 4:25:00 PM
Wonderful write of gratitude and devotion, loved it Laura!
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Date: 1/1/2020 2:05:00 PM
having read previous poems I am sure Nick is your rock Luloo, may you continue to build strong foundations together:-) hugs Jan xx
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