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Santa’s little helper felt poorly sick Couldn’t deliver presents for Saint Nick His red nose was gleaming Blue eyes they were streaming I hope that Santa will give him some Vick 24th December 2014

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Date: 10/14/2016 5:25:00 AM
Still some time before Christmas...but I could resist. What a holly jolly poem! :^D MC
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Date: 4/5/2015 11:10:00 PM
Jan, Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/6/2015 4:14:00 AM
Thanks Linda:-) Hugs jan x
Date: 12/29/2014 7:59:00 PM
I have always loved Limericks and this one is great. You have a true gift for rhyme. Hugs Shane xx
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Shane Cooper
Date: 12/29/2014 8:21:00 PM
True talent will out they say. I am looking forward to reading the next 400 and seeing how your style has developed. Hugs Shane xxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/29/2014 8:03:00 PM
I love writing with Rhyme Shane but am deviating and learning all the time and trying other forms and growing as a poet - amazing to think I'd never written until my hubby had cancer surgery last November 2013 now have over 450 poems since i started posting in February! hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/28/2014 10:08:00 AM
lol, thanks for a good chuckle - can always rely on you for a laugh! Hope you had a great Xmas and that your New Year will be very happy xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/28/2014 10:12:00 AM
I got the one ift I wanted for dad to still be with us on Christmas day jack and i find no fun in new year I find it quite depressing but i cant wait to see the back of 2014! lol:-) Hugs Jan
Date: 12/27/2014 1:49:00 PM
It must have worked, I received my presents. Good old Vick to the rescue once again. Keep the funnies coming Jan, James :) xxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/27/2014 5:12:00 PM
Glad you had a good time James:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/25/2014 10:34:00 AM
Oh, I love that Vick, when I am down with a flu. 7 Merry Christmas & a very Happy New Year and may all your wishes and dreams come true
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/25/2014 4:50:00 PM
Awesome :) Prayers
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2014 2:55:00 PM
I got my Christmas wish for dad to still be here and to have one more Christmas with us:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/25/2014 8:49:00 AM
Nice rhyming humorous write, Jan, Merry Christmas
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2014 8:51:00 AM
thanks so much Dr Ram:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/25/2014 8:28:00 AM
Merry Christmas sweet Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2014 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Richard - i got the one thing I wanted - for dad to still be with us on Christmas Day:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/25/2014 7:44:00 AM
No one wants to be sick on Christmas...funny Jan....hugs Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2014 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Tim hope you had a great day:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/25/2014 5:33:00 AM
Nice one! BTW, if it is for Andrea's contest, you have to use a specific title. Check the rules. Cheers, Roy
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2014 8:27:00 AM
No its just for fun Roy I have written several:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/25/2014 3:07:00 AM
well done, I like it...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2014 3:13:00 AM
Thank David:-) Seasons greetings to you -) Hugs Jan xx :-)
Date: 12/24/2014 10:33:00 PM
Delightful! Merry Christmas to you! d.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2014 3:12:00 AM
Thanks Daniel:-) Seasons greetings to you too:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2014 8:39:00 PM
Wow! Very humourous! A very merry christmas to you!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2014 3:11:00 AM
Thanks Sneha:-)Seasons greetings to you too:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2014 6:57:00 PM
Jan,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/24/2014 6:59:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda I hope that 2015 is a better year for us both - this year been worst one of my life and I guess its the same for you my friend:-( Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/24/2014 4:36:00 PM
Agree, cute!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/24/2014 6:15:00 PM
thanks Mark:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/24/2014 3:18:00 PM
cute Jan, have a merry Chrisymas
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/24/2014 3:25:00 PM
I will try Robert - hope you have a great time:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 12/24/2014 2:55:00 PM
keep the laughter going and have a merry Christmas,jan.. huggs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/24/2014 2:59:00 PM
I will try Nette - Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/24/2014 2:50:00 PM
Good humour once again...I remember we used to put Vicks in warm water and put a towel over our head; was quite effective. // hugs ...... paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/24/2014 2:57:00 PM
Thanks Paul :-) I considered putting this into Andrea's contest but have written another one:-) Hugs jan xx