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Midnight B R E E Z E

last week we s k i p p e d stones across the reverie like they were emeralds, comets fell, and constellations called our names; i thought of how your hands reminded me of venus, and your kiss like the water treading upon mars a million stars began falling and there you were, just like always- the cosmos speak of our love like wise words from buddha’s lips, and everything we thought we knew diminished into the twilit midnight b r e e z e like pebbles settling along the rigid shore, you surface me with passion- like a tidal wave across the atlantic you engulf me holding the ebb flow only we two can carry; (and for that) i love you, my sweet just the slightest brush of your hand against mine is enough to shatter any fallacies we may encounter- i am your eternal light, you are my forever love, and together we shall shine until the sky no longer exists ~NO ONE IS AS BEAUTIFUL AS YOU~ how can romance be so strong after so many years? i say to thee in a gentle hush... "because true love can only exist if it is found in the depths of the deepest oceans- unlocked in the soul of the most giving soul, and needed in the heart of greatest loving heart there ever was". (and that is what we have - my love) for there will never be another- (no never) another lover… for me so tell me sweetheart- how can i stop loving you? WHEN ALL YOU DO IS MOVE ME January 29th, 2018

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Date: 1/29/2020 12:20:00 PM
Laura your writing is simply beautiful! Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 1/29/2020 12:19:00 PM
Phenomenal write, Luloo:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/3/2019 10:48:00 AM
It was my pleasure to once again partake in the beauty of your stunning romantic poem, Luloo. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/9/2018 1:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Laura. Great imagery.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/6/2018 3:19:00 PM
thank you lovely Subimal :)-luloo
Date: 4/7/2018 2:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem of love!
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/6/2018 3:18:00 PM
many thank lovely Susan :)-luloo
Date: 4/5/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Laura. Many nice lines ! Congratulations for your win :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/6/2018 3:18:00 PM
thank you so much! :)-luloo
Date: 3/3/2018 1:18:00 PM
You had me hanging on every word, Laura. Superbly done. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/6/2018 3:18:00 PM
thank you sweet Line :)-luloo
Date: 2/27/2018 7:02:00 PM
Absolutely breathtaking Luloo.. Your romantic poem tells of a magnificent love story that is unlike anything that was before it and that 'nothing' can be after it.. Superb and completely captivating poetry dear Luloo.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/4/2018 8:00:00 PM
Such a beautiful true and transcending love you both share - a rare and precious gift :))
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/28/2018 12:29:00 PM
many thanks Susan, it's all nonfiction about my wonderful hubby :) Love him so much! :)-luloo
Date: 2/27/2018 4:18:00 PM
This romantic poem deserves its spot near the top Laura! It was a delight to read and savor! Congratulations my friend! : )
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/28/2018 12:28:00 PM
thank you so much sweet Connie :)-luloo
Date: 2/27/2018 9:31:00 AM
Majestic wording laura, sooo romantic congrats on another top win, you sure know what I like!
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/28/2018 12:28:00 PM
thank you so much dear John I am honored every contest you host, no matter the placement :) -luloo
Date: 2/23/2018 12:48:00 PM
Dear LL Congrats for you win. it is indeed a deserving win
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/28/2018 12:27:00 PM
many thanks Muhammad ;)-luloo
Date: 2/14/2018 12:59:00 AM
Hi Laura, This is sooo romantic. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/14/2018 8:44:00 AM
aww thanks sweet Alexis :)-luloo
Date: 2/13/2018 10:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, laura, great romantic write for the contest! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/14/2018 8:44:00 AM
thank you dear Eve :)-luloo
Date: 2/13/2018 4:26:00 PM
Luloo, great job of melding magical metaphors with eternal clasps of connectedness in this lovely poem! Congratulations on your gold-medal finish! All my very best to you and yours. :) Bartholomew
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/14/2018 8:44:00 AM
many thanks Bart :)-luloo
Date: 2/13/2018 2:24:00 PM
Wow Luloo!!!! This is just BEAUTIFUL!! Such a loving and romantic tribute to your true love. Congratulations on your win!!! ~Judy
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/14/2018 8:44:00 AM
thank you I love my hubby so much ;) -luloo
Date: 2/13/2018 3:07:00 AM
- What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Laura :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/13/2018 8:35:00 AM
thank you sweet Sunshine :) love your name by the way, not sure if I told you that before :)-luloo
Date: 2/13/2018 1:39:00 AM
Wow, this is absolutely stunning. A well deserved win...
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/13/2018 8:35:00 AM
aww thanks Kai! hope all is well with you :) -luloo
Date: 2/12/2018 11:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura on your first position win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/13/2018 8:34:00 AM
many thanks Subimal ;) -luloo
Date: 2/12/2018 6:37:00 PM
congratulations luloo on this beautiful write, got me in. read it twice and it got even better, :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/13/2018 8:34:00 AM
aww thanks Lewis :) -luloo
Date: 2/12/2018 4:44:00 PM
The imagery created with your pen in this poem is fantastic, so many romantic lines and poem many will love.. I think anyone would be proud for their partner to write them this poem... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/13/2018 8:34:00 AM
thank you dear SO, it's not hard when you have such loving inspiration :) -lulooo
Date: 1/29/2018 9:15:00 AM
Beautiful ... Enjoyed ...
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/13/2018 8:33:00 AM
many thanks Probir :) -luloo
Date: 1/29/2018 2:33:00 AM
- A reminder ... of love - Lovely poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/13/2018 8:33:00 AM
thank you sweet lady :)-luloo

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