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You Fill Up My Senses - Music To My Ears Contest

*You fill up my senses like a night in the forest* You are my life thoughts of you fill my soul. Through rain and shine. loving dreams brings us close, My arms want to hold you my lips want to burn under yours. My eyes sparkle with the thought of you like green jewels, in a limpid pool We are as one **Come let me hold you, let me love you again** * and ** the two lines I used from Annie's Song - John Denver Contest by Silent One - music to my ears contest 27/72015

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Theresa Cw

Date: 7/27/2015 1:39:00 PM

I'll second all that Viv has said, I haven't been with Poetry Soup to long and I enjoy reading everyone's poems so far. The beauty you pen is so very beautiful Seren. You and Lyric Man sure pen quite exquisite together. I sure feel like this should come in first place..... Hugs Theresa

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/2/2015 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Theresa, I enjoyed the compliment.....Seren

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/27/2015 1:38:00 AM

Lovely, gentle write, Seren, nicely interwoven. I was wondering how people would approach this contest, and you've done it really well. Best wishes for the contest. Viv x

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/2/2015 7:18:00 AM

Thanks Viv.... Was a pleasure to do....Seren