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You Don'T Look Well

Today I wish I knew That’ll you're through My one and only Drew Oh my time, just flew And now have to stew Because you're through Are you sick? Maybe Flu? Farewell, my darling Boo! Alexis Y. 03/14/2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/17/2021 2:18:00 AM

YOU have made this monorhyme look TOO easy to DO.

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/14/2021 8:44:00 PM

Did Drew your boo go boo-hoo when he was through? Great write from you.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2021 2:29:00 PM

Oh, do tell us more about Boo! Such a cute poem, Alexis. Hugs, Carolyn

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/14/2021 11:28:00 AM

Hello Alexis Y. you got me wondering who Boo is to. Enjoy your day my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/14/2021 10:19:00 AM

Great monorhyme. Made me smile and wonder who Boo is.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/14/2021 8:47:00 AM

I’m guessing Boo is your pet, it’s not surprising you are upset. Take care ~ Belle

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/14/2021 9:04:00 AM

Hi Belle, I was going for “ light” humor in the monorhyme form. Thanks for being the one to visit and comment. Have a great day:-)Alexis