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My eyes Look for you My heart Bleeds the truth My Spirit Enters your soul completely Your heart Bled for me upon that tree Loved me each second When my Mind and heart were far away My soul Was dry as cirrus clouds Empty Being blown over desert land Without Hope or promise My being Without fruit Or Filled with withered fruit Ready For the fire where dead wood goes Then My soul found the One I now love He Filled my being with His hope I Rejoice each day with Him Learn To lean on His everlasting strength Prayer, meditation, scripture Now Fill my empty hours If only You could Learn By doing the above Reaching up You complete me
Contest: You complete Me Poetry Contest Sponsor: James Edward Lee, Sr. Written: March 06, 2019 Alternate ending stanza: By doing the last five stanzas Reaching up to Him He will complete you

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Date: 4/20/2019 3:00:00 AM
With Love, the soul is fulfilled, contented and blessed.. with belief and Faith the Self reaches inner peace and harmony.. with prayers, we bare our hearts in recognition and gratitude.. An exquisite depiction of a divine, spiritual state a soul can reach.. an immense pleasure while reading.. in my fave list. My warmest wishes and blessings.
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Date: 4/20/2019 10:27:00 AM
Besma, Thanks for the honor of you faving my poem. I appreciate the kind review. Inner peace and harmony is very important in this uncertain world in which we live. Thank you for dropping by. Sara
Date: 3/31/2019 5:07:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful in meaning allowing us to feel your heart and mind in but a glimpse. Carries your message strong without pushing away... Inspiring, thank you for sharing!
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Date: 3/31/2019 7:39:00 AM
Anna, Thanks for the lovely review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara
Date: 3/28/2019 1:32:00 PM
Amen! :)
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Date: 3/28/2019 4:05:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 3/27/2019 10:13:00 PM
Very inspiring write, Sara, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/28/2019 4:06:00 PM
Eve, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 3/22/2019 2:46:00 PM
- Beautiful written, Sara :) - No doubt ... you have posted the winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2019 6:44:00 PM
SS, Thanks for the visit and the encouraging comments. Your presence at my work is always uplifting. Sara
Date: 3/20/2019 7:31:00 AM
Wow, this is truly classic poetry, at its best..love this Sara.
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Date: 3/20/2019 10:13:00 AM
Harry, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by . Sara
Date: 3/16/2019 1:46:00 PM
Such an extraordinary profession of faith in your beautifully composed poem, Sara. And I love the photo you selected too. You give us much to ponder as Easter approaches. Best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 3/20/2019 10:12:00 AM
Carolyn, Thanks for dropping by and taking time to leave a comment. That is a great photo isn't it. Sara
Date: 3/16/2019 8:42:00 AM
A lovely poem of love...
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Date: 3/16/2019 6:16:00 PM
Arturo, Thanks for the uplifting review of my work. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 3/15/2019 10:18:00 AM
this is lovely, my friend
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Date: 3/15/2019 4:30:00 PM
Jack, Thanks for the uplifting review of my work. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 3/14/2019 1:51:00 AM
Complete in its way.
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Date: 3/14/2019 5:41:00 PM
John, Yes, He completes me but I don't add anything to Him. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 3/12/2019 12:34:00 PM
Your spiritual spirit rises in this piece Sara. Peace be with you and best wishes...
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Date: 3/13/2019 10:21:00 AM
Charlie, Ahhh!! Thanks so much for the blessing. I needed one this morning. Sara
Date: 3/10/2019 3:15:00 AM
Excellent. This is beautiful Meditation and divine devotion too. Well penned too. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/10/2019 6:20:00 AM
Ravi, Thanks for the uplifting review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara
Date: 3/9/2019 2:02:00 PM
Oh Sara this is a winner for sure. The picture is so perfect too. An absolute fave for me. Can't say how much this poem means to me. Great Stuff! God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/10/2019 6:15:00 AM
Judy, Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to comment on my work. I am honored that you would fav my work. I hope that it has given you a spiritual uplift and encouragement. Sara
Date: 3/8/2019 7:46:00 PM
Sara, very nice, your faith is shining bright in this write ~
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Date: 3/8/2019 5:30:00 PM
food for the soul is this gracious work,sara... blessed be!...huggs
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Date: 3/8/2019 10:01:00 AM
Well done, Sara; as a rule, I don't like religious poetry because there's so many cliche's...that being said, BRAVO that you didn't use them! Your use of your own words makes all the difference when reading a poem. Lovely.
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Date: 3/8/2019 10:05:00 AM
M.L., I am glad that you liked this poem of faith and hope. I appreciate you reading it and taking time to comment on my work. Thanks for visiting my pages. Sara
Date: 3/7/2019 8:40:00 PM
Beautiful Meditation; such divine devotion. Thank you for sharing, Sara. Blessings!
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Date: 3/8/2019 6:29:00 AM
Joe, Your comments are uplifting. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara
Date: 3/7/2019 7:08:00 PM
wow you took it to a high spiritual plain, Sara. VEry well done!
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Date: 3/8/2019 6:29:00 AM
Andrea, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Date: 3/7/2019 12:09:00 PM
You write wonderful poetry Sara - charming and insightful - love your poem. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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Date: 3/7/2019 2:32:00 PM
Jennifer, Thanks for the visit to my page. Your comments add a special touch. Sara
Date: 3/6/2019 10:58:00 PM
You did a wonderful job with this, Sara! I enjoyed the read and wish you all the best in the contest. :-)
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Date: 3/7/2019 9:10:00 AM
Carol, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment on my work. Thanks for best wishes. Sara