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"MY EYES LOOK FOR YOU; MY HEART BLEEDS THE TRUTH MY SPIRIT ENTERS YOUR SOUL, completely, we are the pieces of a puzzle that fit perfectly you are my east, my west, my north, and my south together we will sail for our true north . . . No matter what direction this life will take us we go together as one, not two . . . Even into the afterlife our souls will entwine forever you are my spirit and I am yours and God himself has blessed our unity Together we can face any problem, any obstacle even those not of our control . . . We will weather any storm, climb any mountain traverse any raging river by upholding each other and praying to God for guidance . . . You are my everything, my reason and your can depend on me always and I know you will ever be my rock and anchor the person I will turn to in grief and never fear I will always be close with our perfect love that God blessed . . . BY DOING THE ABOVE REACHING UP YOU COMPLETE ME" ___________________________ March 4, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/You Complete Me Copyright Protected, ID 19-1121-184-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the Standard Contest, You Complete Me sponsor, James Edward Lee Sr. Second Place

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Date: 3/30/2019 2:47:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 3/28/2019 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your win.
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Date: 3/27/2019 10:33:00 PM
Very inspiring of one's deep felt emotion , Dear Heart , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/19/2019 4:45:00 AM
Wonderful and hopeful poetry dear Poet. I like the positive energy in your words.
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Date: 3/17/2019 4:39:00 PM
Uplifting and divine... a righteous write. Blessings & Peace
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Date: 3/14/2019 11:58:00 AM
Oh, this is an indeed a breathtaking piece. I am utterly out of breath! Going on my FAV list. Thank you for being a stalwart friend. Love, Panagiota 3/14/2019
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Date: 3/5/2019 4:36:00 AM
Great pillars of love...All the best Dear Heart
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Date: 3/5/2019 4:03:00 AM
Constance, I started to highlight my favorite parts, but alas, they are all my favorite parts. Each line falling in line with the one above and the one below in a dance that makes utter sense.
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