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You and Me and She

There’s you and me and ….she
But lack of harmony
I’ll take my life; you’ll see
So that you’ll have your…she

Now only you and….she
NOT happy as can be
Haunted by ghost of me
I terrorize your… SHE

Now you and me and….SHE
A ghoulish trinity
Can’t make love to your....she
Cause all you see is ME!

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!


Eileen Manassian

To all the women out there who have to share their men with another SHE...

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Harry Horsman

August 31, 2014 at 6:45 AM

I Believe i read a different you here,,but i am not surprised at all, your range of intellect is certainly world-class, as is your poetry,,remember this Eileen, you bring us all such joy in your poetry,,,especially in my little corner of the universe,,your poems are like the sunrise giving each and everyone of us strength for another day...

Eileen Manassian

August 31, 2014 at 6:51 AM

HARRY~~~ BLESS YOU!~~~~ Thank you for this post. I'm so so touched. It is the sweetest post of yours on my work and I will cherish it! Thank you for believing in me. If you only knew what poetry means to me....I cannot live without it, though I try. Especially of late...I'm trying to break from this addiction...Little by little...I have a vacation coming up next week, and internet will not let me be online much. Two weeks...perhaps that will help me! Thanks!!! :)

Maurice Yvonne

August 30, 2014 at 1:06 PM

you are a poet by nature. what an amazing gift the universe has bestowed upon you. i am a stage director. what i love about my career is that i feel there is no director anywhere who is better then me. many who are amazing and different and just as good as me. i hope you feel the same about your poetry.

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2014 at 1:12 PM

This couldn't have come at a better time, Maurice. I'm discouraged about my work. :( It seems sometimes like I'm on the edge when I want to be diving in the glorious water. I'm old school in my writing. I don't know how to evoke imagery that is "different". I do love words, though. Thank you so much for your kind comment and for this peek into your life. Must be fascinating. I also love acting. ;) Can I be cast in a play?

Richard Lamoureux

August 30, 2014 at 8:34 AM

Dispite my thoughts on this one it seems to be met with great fan fare. At least you know I will only tell you the truth about what I like and that is pretty much everything that you write.

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2014 at 1:13 PM

Thank you, Richard. That means a great deal to me.

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 30, 2014 at 5:23 AM

Sarcasm, as you might know, my dear poetess, comes from the Greek verb "Sarkazein" which means to cut the flesh of an animal with your teeth in order to devour. Here the " Sarkazein" is done with words but it is as effective as the real one! Frightening SARCASM! Effectively expressed! POOR SHE! POOR HE!!!

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2014 at 1:13 PM

You are rich in kindness to me. Bless you for it. I am in need of kindness. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 30, 2014 at 7:51 AM

You are so Rich in sentiments and ideas, my dearest Eileen, you can never be poor!!!

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2014 at 5:40 AM

Poor poor me! Thank you, dear poet for visiting me. I LOVE GREEK! You know that well. What a language. Oh...how it speaks to my heart. The history....the contributions it's made to civilization. You, my dear...are a GREEK of the GREEKS! :) Welcome! Kalos erthes!

Justin Bordner

August 29, 2014 at 8:17 PM

There is a nobility in this sacrafice, a woman made wraith by love's fate...a madness of our own making. Love the macabre devotion and affection. A good lover is a possessive lover Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2014 at 4:59 AM

Possessive...indeed. I am possessive and can be obsessive at times. That is the intensity of my life, Justin. I'm teaching myself to try to be more....moderate. I need to survive life. Thank you for seeing beauty in this crazy write of mine. The reason is that beauty resides in you.

Charmaine Chircop

August 29, 2014 at 7:12 PM

Eileen I really liked your witty and sarcastic poem which speaks volumes,but in that case,Why don't she take his life?:].. Now I'm just kidding,but I know such realities exist,Some can feel trapped forever in such situations,especially when there are children involved. Very profound!!

Eileen Manassian

August 30, 2014 at 4:57 AM

;) Dear, oh dear....Sometimes nothing can be done. You are right about that, my dear. Thank you for your visit and for enjoying my little silly poem. HUGS

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 29, 2014 at 10:44 AM

It's a true write Eileen n truth tastes bitter! It so happened wid one of my close friends who is struggling now! Please don't try to be that she my dear! God save from such triangles!!

Eileen Manassian

August 29, 2014 at 10:46 AM

There is only pain when that happens, Dr Upma. Thanks for your visit to my work and your sweet comments as usual. God bless.

Paul Callus

August 29, 2014 at 10:39 AM

Haaa! Eileen.....this brings out the devil in you!! Hey you woman (the other one, I mean) beware! That's why I say love thy neighbor, but beware of love triangles:) hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian

August 29, 2014 at 10:45 AM

Yes...this is a prime example of your work, Paul. :) Some women are good at putting up a fight and defending their writes. Some stay because of the children....and some because of societal taboos....and some bleed. Oh well, this was a good rant and I enjoyed writing it. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

August 29, 2014 at 9:07 AM

This is indeed creepy, I won't be adding this one tomy favorites.

Eileen Manassian

August 29, 2014 at 9:39 AM

I'm sorry you don't like this write, Richard. Sometimes painful things are said in jest. This is a reality for many women who are bound to the situation for various reasons. Thanks for passing by.

J. R. Corbin

August 29, 2014 at 8:46 AM

Yikes! That is definitely creepy, Eileen. (Guess I better hide all my girlfriends ;) I love the diabolical laughter at the end. You should use this one for a Halloween contest. Jim

Eileen Manassian

August 29, 2014 at 9:41 AM

Thanks, JR. I don't join the Halloween contests....I hardly join contests. I do now and again. If I'm really moved, but I don't believe in Halloween and I don't like to promote it. Having said that...I don't believe in ghosts. Oh, there IS the supernatural, but I have my own take on that. This was meant to be satirical. Perhaps it is in poor taste. I don't know. Thanks for commenting, anyway!

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