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my hopes and wishes are made of dreams heavenly images and imagined things fairy tale princess and heavenly queens my visions are of you a mermaid in my dream my thoughts are things with wings flying where they please and angels slow decent fall in my arms fly me up to heaven and woo me with your charm my diva has captured me with her love and song i dream the endless dream and sing it all day long my ballerina dances and sways around my waiting pose begging me with her movements that i should now propose my poetess whom i love from a distance i give you words of love they flow like words from heaven and decend on you like a dove

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Constance La France

Date: 1/28/2010 8:47:00 PM

lovely and romantic.. I really like the line.." my thoughts are things with wings"

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2010 10:00:00 PM

This is a really beautiful love poem from you, John. As for MY neighborhood, I live in a pretty decent one in a little city called Pleasant Grove, but my gosh, Salt Lake is really going to the dogs!!

Lynette Chachere

Date: 1/27/2010 8:53:00 PM

i love your way of writing. our imagination is magic! -Always Lynette

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/27/2010 10:06:00 AM

John this is such a beautiful poem,for this Mermaid,ballerina,this girl which sings of love,in your dreams,This poetess you love from a distance must be honored to be cherished from a good friend this way,and im sure she is happy reading this poem,beautiful and going to my Favz..Charma