You

The sight of you, the scent of you, the taste of you, the feel of you. The weight, the heat, the rhythm and motion of you. The guttural sounds of pleasure you release from way down within you. Wrap me gently, keep me safely, deep within the heart of you. There content I will forever be, with you.

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/28/2017 11:07:00 AM

A very beautiful written poem, I really enjoyed reading it, i like you continuesly in one of my poems and someone say me that it shows thzt how much I m obsessed with her, that s what I ll say to you that this you shows how much you lpve your partner, may both of you lives all your life happily together however i m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest about them

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 7/8/2009 3:15:00 PM

Dear Patricia, Exceptional LOVE POEM I know of the contentment of living in some Ones HEART YOU are well versed in LOVE ALWAYS... HG

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/4/2009 1:50:00 PM

Awesome job piece packed with passion! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/1/2009 6:16:00 PM

Pat, This is one hot poem "BABY!!!" I'm smiling here. I think I read this before. It shows so much heat and passion followed by the peaceful feeling of contentment. Very nice write. Passionate, but I didn't even blush. LOL And I sometimes do blush on here. Keep writing, friend. Lovingly, Dane

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/30/2009 7:19:00 PM

Patty, this is pure joy at it's basic understanding of human love, this is a really creative poem!!!! the rhythm of your first stanza really sets-up the poem for a sweet ride!!! and thanks for warm comments!! jim