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Yoo Hoo - Is Anyone Home

YOO HOO! IS ANYONE HOME! Look up from your tablet --- Neighboring trees are tapping, ringing, asking for sugar. They just want to say: “Howdy! Good Morning!” They shake their leaves with big wide grins. Almost too much to take in the a.m.! And you notice, like a childhood dream, the whole wide world is peeking in. You throw open a door to the rushing feet of a brisk wind, your guest so forward, it turns your cheeks red. Yet, you welcome the gesture of warmth, nevertheless, grabbing your blanket, and a piping hot cup of strong Kona. Looking down once again at warm and brisk words, that steam up spectacles peeking through a tablet’s window pane, wondering if I can be seen, my nouns and verbs smiling at you. Kim Rodrigues© 2016

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Date: 12/14/2016 5:36:00 PM
Now that is what I call multicultural co-empathic communication! (Somehow it sounds more lovely the way you say it.) Thx, too, for spinning through my way this morning.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2016 6:42:00 PM
Thanks and your welcome, Gerald!
Date: 12/13/2016 11:39:00 AM
Very Creative writing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2016 4:09:00 PM
:)
Date: 12/9/2016 7:10:00 AM
And I smile back! Is 'Kona' a type of coffee or something else? Great write, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2016 7:12:00 AM
Coffee :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2016 7:11:00 AM
Coffee :)
Date: 12/9/2016 7:07:00 AM
Hi there, come on in. :) This was really nicely done Kim. I enjoyed reading this creative poem. Happy to see your words smiles.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2016 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! Sometimes, we get so lost in writing, we forget to look up and see it is day! :)

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