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Yogi - the Able Snowman

There once was a snowman named Pipes who liked breaking stereotypes. He once wore a Toga and in it did Yoga - Hysterical folk needed wipes. The children there stood upside down for pleasure, and Pipes hid a frown. “They laugh at my shape - I’ll make them all gape at how I amaze all the town.” ~After managing a headstand!~ Against him all kids held a grudge. Pipes said, drinking hot chocolate fudge, “for greater good I’ll stay here for a while - should teach you to think twice, not judge!” --------------------------------------------------- 31/12/2017

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Date: 6/3/2018 5:52:00 AM
Very clever, you made me laugh
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Date: 2/11/2018 9:02:00 AM
Very cute and humorous. I liked the write.
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Date: 2/4/2018 12:14:00 PM
LOL, love it
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Date: 1/23/2018 10:03:00 PM
Wow! Terrific! You've set "Frosty the Snowman on his proverbial ear---and then some! Not only is this highbrow humor, but that last stanza is a combo of social message-personal putdown ZINGER. Well-deserved victory, Sneha!
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Date: 1/20/2018 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Sneha. Regards Tom
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Date: 1/18/2018 5:31:00 PM
Sneha, there is a good lesson here in this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/18/2018 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on this merited win, Sneha! Had no doubt this would make you proud:) Regards // paul
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:58:00 PM
Excellent work Sneha and I am sure every child would love to read this aloud and laugh.
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Date: 1/13/2018 7:13:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/7/2018 9:01:00 AM
Creativity at it's best! Love this :) Congrats on your win and best wishes to you dear Sneha!
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Date: 1/7/2018 3:14:00 AM
Funny and clever, Sneha, well done! Viv x
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Date: 1/7/2018 3:14:00 AM
Funny and clever, Sneha, well done! Viv x
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Date: 1/6/2018 4:10:00 PM
Delightful. Congrats on your fine win, Sneha.
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Date: 1/6/2018 1:30:00 PM
Well done, congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/31/2017 7:28:00 PM
Sneha, this is VERY VERY good. The meter, the humor. Wow, a FAVE.
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Date: 12/31/2017 4:46:00 PM
Oh! This is excellent Sneha! Not one, but three Limericks! I love your Yogi:) I hope this is for the contest...would definitely see it on the winners' list! Regards // paul
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Date: 12/31/2017 8:07:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Sneha--the Yogi sure had talent--unique theme, well executed..best for a win.
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Date: 12/31/2017 4:02:00 AM
" drinking hot chocolate fudge," warms the inside, a pleasure to the mind...Comparing sometimes ...you miss the whole picture...All the best for 2018
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Date: 12/31/2017 2:43:00 AM
Absolutely BRILLIANT Sneha!!! You are such an incredibly talented young lady I am in awe of your creativity!:-) Sending my very best wishes for 2018:-) hugs jan xx
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