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Have we not as yet, God face to face met, fearful to dissolve, that we may evolve? Our tremulous heart, feels not bliss beats start, renewed with each breath, as love’s healing meth. As long as there’s doubt and dark desires grout, how may we be free, tied to our mind tree? A dead man walking, with thought forms stalking, we yet pause not to God’s love and light woo. The question is this: how may we find bliss; joy that never fades, in heavenly glades? By cleansing heart’s stain, we can yet regain, the flame of our soul, that we may feel whole. 07-May-2023 ___________ Writing Challenge - 'Y 'Words - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 5/11/2023 1:33:00 PM
Love the last stanza! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 5/11/2023 7:35:00 PM
Thank you, Linda :)
Date: 5/11/2023 1:17:00 PM
Your poetry "Youth" is fantastic. From the first Verse to the last, I was engrossed. I am happy for you that you won.
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Date: 5/11/2023 7:35:00 PM
Ah ~ the topic was ‘Yet’, not ‘Youth’ :)
Date: 5/11/2023 1:08:00 PM
- A lovely poem, U.S. - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 5/11/2023 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, dear Anne :)
Date: 5/11/2023 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. You make us think and that is a good thing. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 5/11/2023 9:31:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/11/2023 7:02:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
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Date: 5/11/2023 7:20:00 AM
Thanks for hosting, Constance! Always a pleasure to participate in your innovative contests.
Date: 5/10/2023 10:01:00 PM
A very thought provoking poem. Congratulations Seeker friend on your first place win.
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Date: 5/11/2023 2:16:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa :)
Date: 5/10/2023 9:54:00 PM
Hi Seeker, Your poems are often deep and thought-provoking. This one was no exception. Excellent vers on your chosen word. I found it to be spiritual as well. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great evening;-) Alexis
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Date: 5/11/2023 2:15:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis. Yes, spirituality is my preferred topic mostly

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