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Yesterday's Reverie

I close my eyes- sounds of fall, sun shines on my face, summer's last hurrah dies away- then I dream

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Jan Harvey

Date: 10/2/2009 2:45:00 PM

What becomes of today with your reference of yesterday helps spirit fly high within us. Very nice! Jan

Karla Null

Date: 9/30/2009 7:44:00 PM

What a beautiful good-by to fall...Karla

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/30/2009 5:49:00 PM

nice imagery, sounds peaceful

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/30/2009 11:50:00 AM

Oh ,I'm looking forward to the dream time..what a lovely poem. Thank you Brian for honoring me in your contest. It means the world to me. BG

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/30/2009 11:50:00 AM

Oh ,I'm looking forward to the dream time..what a lovely poem. Thank you Brian for honoring me in your contest. It means the world to me. BG

John Freeman

Date: 9/30/2009 11:03:00 AM

Awesome fibonacci Brian, one of my favorites, Sincerely Moses

Elaine George

Date: 9/30/2009 10:08:00 AM

I did exactly that for a short time yesterday. Sat on my back deck - very close to heaven, I would say. Wonderful Fibonacci. Also, I wish to thank you for my third place in your contest - (Intervals). I did however discovered a typo today and corrected it. I must say, Brian, you and these contests you sponsor are the wind beneath my poetic wings. Thank you for letting me fly. Elaine

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/30/2009 6:46:00 AM

This is a wonderful passing of the season poem Brian - I thank you for the honor of winning your contest - It was by far my favorite contest of all I have entered - To be honest I was amazed at how well it all just blended together - Very interesting and enjoyable contest Brian - I'll leave my address on your soup mail, God Bless, YF4L, mj

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/30/2009 6:29:00 AM

Prettiest stanza in here. All the best.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2009 6:09:00 AM

I truly enjoyed reading your poetry today Brian. Thank you. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2009 6:07:00 AM

Beautifully done. Sleep on. soup never came through. Keep writing. Sara

Geoffery Mchugh

Date: 9/30/2009 5:55:00 AM

The words Ring clear as a bell, true and lovely.

P Sheart

Date: 9/30/2009 5:09:00 AM

Here's to dreaming Brian ....With each new season comes another one to enjoy. Beautifully written Fibonacci. I should try this form. I really like it. Have a wonderful week! It's back to the grindstone for me next week. Will comment when I can though. Will miss my quite time writing as much. Love Light Truth Patricia