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Yesterday's Grace

Her final gift was a crimson package Topped with a neat little bow Tied with utmost care and love It laid forgotten in my closet But yesterday it was again found And my eyes became misty So I chased the shadow of past steps And found myself at the beach My heartbeat frantic My tears fueled a blazing tempest My thoughts were jumbled And I dropped the gift on the shore As I fell upon my knees My hands fiddled with the bow And I lifted the lid To harvest what laid within Yesterday's grace For within the crimson package Nothing was to be found But a sentence written upon paper With her last words "You made me proud" 4/9/2018

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Date: 4/24/2018 6:51:00 AM
How poignant, and suspenseful. Well writ, well done. Regards, Viv
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Christopher Goss
Date: 4/24/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 4/23/2018 10:31:00 PM
Goodness! Brought tears. Great imagery and build up. Congratulations on your win.
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Christopher Goss
Date: 4/24/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thank you for reading!
Date: 4/23/2018 5:32:00 PM
Hi Christopher, You made good use of the chosen words.This well written piece tugged at the heart strings. Congratulations on your 1st place win :-) Alexis
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Christopher Goss
Date: 4/23/2018 8:24:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/23/2018 2:58:00 PM
Oh wow Christopher, you've made me teary-eyed. So beautiful. Congrats on your placement :)
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Christopher Goss
Date: 4/23/2018 5:13:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/23/2018 1:14:00 PM
A beautiful heartfelt write Christopher...Congrats on your win..
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Christopher Goss
Date: 4/23/2018 5:13:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/9/2018 2:55:00 PM
I would be shocked if this did not actually happen, as I am there, reading this tribute, and my eyes are weak with the love of it. Well done; took me immediately to a feeling place, which I try to hide well.
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Christopher Goss
Date: 4/9/2018 4:53:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 4/9/2018 1:07:00 PM
What a most endearing poem. So sentimental and sweet. Well penned, Christopher.
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Christopher Goss
Date: 4/9/2018 1:22:00 PM
Thank you. I had some difficulties with this one!

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