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Yesterday, time stirrred of reveries when All of Summer brought colours bright; My love's longing roamed this place, yet Troubles whipped our days; in a rush it Seemed your tenderness withered fast. So hasty for that promise of evermore, Far from flames that once led us to new stars Away from a maze, until noons grew cold. Now, despair widenened a river made, It drained petals crowning your hair. But love Looks at us without a glimpse of eternity As miles flew by, not one word for a heart yearned. Though roots are tended where gardens bloom They're dried by sun's heat, unwatered and frail; Here where our fingers dug into the sand To memorize the glory of dew. I asked you to Stay and wait for birds to name our songs. Oh, those hours when wings of joy flew I recall the way your smile rustled with the wind. Believe me, I'm unable to bequeath this glow In you I found the luster of dusk, more beaming than Yesterday, today or even tomorrow, still--- Yesterday's Acrostic Contest

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Date: 3/6/2014 11:46:00 PM
Beautiful, imagery, deep and lovely, when it comes to nature.... Manny, ~ Linda
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Date: 2/8/2014 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your great acrostic and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/8/2014 8:00:00 AM
Great expressive winning work..Way to go ..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2014 8:11:00 AM
A wonderful poem and win, congrats.
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Date: 2/6/2014 4:53:00 PM
Manny congrats on win hugs
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Date: 2/6/2014 4:11:00 PM
Especially like that last stanza..and the way you ended..well done and congrats. BG
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Date: 2/6/2014 1:47:00 PM
Nicely done.....congratulations
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Date: 2/6/2014 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations Manny xx
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Date: 2/6/2014 12:19:00 PM
Manny, congratulations on the win. I overlooked an obvious error in line 11, which you ought to fix, but didn't discount the poem because of it. I see a lot of regret, which fits the song the poem is based on. Cheers, Roy
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Manny Paras
Date: 2/9/2014 12:52:00 PM
Thanks, Roy. I fixed it. I read my entry twice and got lost between the lines.
Date: 1/30/2014 8:19:00 PM
Manny, love, the nature of this poem... SKAT
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Date: 1/29/2014 8:27:00 PM
hello, manny.. a wishful, splendid thought for love's return.. i like that unfinished last line; it dovetails with affairs of the heart-in-waiting... thanks for your feedback.. spill ink and join us more often.. huggs!
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