Yearning For Frost Flowers

I yearn for when my troubles were as frost flowers; when the intermittent wresting
of my inner strings was natural , a part of growing up, and when, from tender stem , 
there emerged feelings of confliction that whirled into a strange collage-puberty's 
design. But whether my ordeals then were unique, like the latticework of 
snowflakes, or as simple as a raindrop on my pane, each one, wing footed, 
eventually melted from my mind.

Later came the common plagues: marital discord, effects of growing old and other 
irritations, weeds I plucked and dandelion fluff I blew away. These I could abide.
But other winters passing now have brought trials which are as a thorny web.
In unexpected times of drought, from seemingly nowhere. . . they sprout. Star 
Thistles (over which I've no control) come time and time again to prick my soul. 
Unlike the fleeting flowers of frondescent youth (whose memory retains for me some 
beauty), these thistles of infliction are both ugly and unyielding. Surrounding me are 
melancholy notes, and though the melody is rallentando, I think this dirge may 
never have an end.


For Catie Lindsey's "Dark Prose" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Horne Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 11:33 AM
love this very descriptive piece, my friend. Glad I can see your oldies now
Pettit Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 4:28 PM
Andrea, congratulations on winning in the contest with this entry. It is very descriptive.
Guzzi Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 2:43 PM
A wonderful write, events all can relate to told in such a different manor with metaphors so unique! 7 Did you place with it? Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Congrats Andrea on your wonderful win in the Dark Prose contest with this sensational write and entry so breathless to read my friend.. enjoy another success story ..with luv..
Mannan Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 9:16 PM
This is great prose work Andrea. I love the images you have painted with words. Many congratulations.
Guzzi Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Just a wonderful, powerful, longing filled ache, great write Andie and so many words i must eat up too for I didn't know their beauty before you ;) Congrad's Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 2:16 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Andrea
Brown Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations to you for your win Andrea in Catie Lindsey's contest "Dark Prose". Love, Carol
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January 15, 2011 at 4:16 AM
This is a powerful, beautifully written piece, Andrea. You have an ability to get to the heart of things - and a descriptive sensitivity which 'blows me away' - Congrats and raise a glass - Liz
Pettit Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 9:19 PM
I can see why you won in the contest. You have such imaginative descriptiveness in this entry.
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January 6, 2011 at 10:11 PM
Wow, so much emotion in this description full poetry, many will be able to relate to these realistic battles of life and broken relations. Thanks for your welcome comments on my poems and favoriting too... Buddleia - is a flowering shrub/tree here that butterflies love... pleased you approved! Kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
Anderson Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 7:25 PM
Hey Andrea! Thanks for the kind comments and I wish you luck in Catie's contest....Happy New Year, Jimmy
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December 31, 2010 at 4:51 PM
Once again, what a prose poem!!! Loved some of the words and combinations in it. rallentando. This will have to place very, very high in that contest. Take care and have a good new year.
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December 31, 2010 at 7:34 AM
Andrea, this is so excellent, the rhythm of words, and the words like snowflakes flying. It pulls one in, the combination of familiar and unfamiliar terms ... above all one is touched by the pathos of the humanity. Happy new year, and thanks always for reading and commenting on my poems, my gifted friend.
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December 31, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Great form and entry for contest.... and a very Hapy New Year to you and all around you....luv Michael
Poet Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 6:33 AM
Wonderful Andrea ! I liked it .Thank u for your inspiring words at my work.Wish you a very HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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December 31, 2010 at 6:24 AM
This write hits this reader ! Yowzers...the gloom of life perplexes us all...one bite at a time dear poet...one bite at a time ! Much love, james
Austin Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 5:59 AM
Humm? How strange to read dark poetry from Andrea, even though it's for a contest. You always seem to keep your bright side showing, no matter the turmoil. Better days are coming, and, sea gulls? Don't forget - Michigan is surrounded by water. Do we have sea gulls? You bet. At every eating place you'll find a few hungry fellows. The gull is my favorite bird. Love, Dave
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December 31, 2010 at 5:47 AM
Andrea, so glad on the eve before New Year's eve you came to the cafe for some soup and sandwich and chose my appetiser from the menu. Your 'Yearning' dark prose above reminds me of my "There Was a time" although my poem was more sad than dark. Have a great 2011! ~Jim
Sweetheart Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 4:45 AM
A splendid write Andrea using prose poetry .. luv the latticework of snowflakes segment .. very expressive and good luck in the challenge Catie has presented to us ... u also amaze me with each new creation my friend.. H.N.Y. with luv..
Mehta Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 4:42 AM
I enjoyed your dirge which is quite dramatic, dark and delicious, Andrea. Happy new year. I found the syllable counter, Thanks for that
Onclaud Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 3:02 AM
darkly beautiful, andrea... enjoyed the style and contest perspective.. much winning luck to you.. huggs, nette
La France Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 8:10 PM
very beautiful, Andrea, dark and dramatic, best of luck in the contest~~
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