Xlvii

Swings pendulate swells and spills mending then breaking still, the salt stings Your moon clings to my window and stares
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Downing  Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 7:38 PM
How did I miss this gorgeous! Tim, another stunning piece... hugs and smiles :)
Vaso Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 11:32 PM
Simply beautiful! Happy New Year!
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 11:14 PM
Wonderful write, Tim, so we'll said. Hugs Eve
Roberts Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 8:30 PM
wow Tim hope 2018 is THE year for you...Seren
Trifiatis Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 12:59 PM
Marvelous adaptation of the theme in question dear Tim! Hope you are fine! Happy New Year my friend!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 12:52 PM
This would fit Greg's contest water and Sky Tim. This is quite lovely! : )
Pandit Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Intriguing write..mending and breaking emotions. Do I sense a longing in the ending lines?..well written Tim.
Daniel Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Wonderful emotions, Tim:)
Lane Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Is the title in reference to an age? This is a very plaintive write, Tim.
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 7:17 AM
- Great written, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 7:11 AM
Images...Very nice..."the salt stings" a real sensation...All the best Tim
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