Xlvii

Swings pendulate swells and spills mending then breaking still, the salt stings Your moon clings to my window and stares

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Date: 1/6/2018 7:38:00 PM

How did I miss this gorgeous! Tim, another stunning piece... hugs and smiles :)

Date: 1/5/2018 11:32:00 PM

Simply beautiful! Happy New Year!

Date: 1/4/2018 11:14:00 PM

Wonderful write, Tim, so we'll said. Hugs Eve

Date: 1/3/2018 8:30:00 PM

wow Tim hope 2018 is THE year for you...Seren

Date: 1/3/2018 12:59:00 PM

Marvelous adaptation of the theme in question dear Tim! Hope you are fine! Happy New Year my friend!

Date: 1/3/2018 12:52:00 PM

This would fit Greg's contest water and Sky Tim. This is quite lovely! : )

Date: 1/3/2018 10:37:00 AM

Intriguing write..mending and breaking emotions. Do I sense a longing in the ending lines?..well written Tim.

Date: 1/3/2018 8:38:00 AM

Wonderful emotions, Tim:)

Date: 1/3/2018 7:47:00 AM

Is the title in reference to an age? This is a very plaintive write, Tim.

Date: 1/3/2018 7:17:00 AM

- Great written, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 1/3/2018 7:11:00 AM

Images...Very nice..."the salt stings" a real sensation...All the best Tim