Written Like a True Six-Year-Old

Their flesh is ooey Their soft places gooey Little boys say phooey to girls and chop suey

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/23/2023 2:08:00 PM

I liked the second monorhyme best Pangie

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2023 7:22:00 PM

You mean soft and gooey is not for you?! (Gross, aren't I?!) :)

Terry Flood

Date: 8/22/2023 3:24:00 PM

Ahhh… that’s where I went wrong. When I was the chase-ee(?) in kiss-chase at school, I should have said phooey instead of coo-ee…. Still… I did get kissed a lot. What a fun write GW, like it lots. Terry

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/22/2023 7:30:00 PM

With a nuzzle like yours, Terry, I can imagine how many kisses you got! lol. ~ Woof, woof

Marikate Kingston

Date: 8/22/2023 2:28:00 PM

And "phooey" to broccoli too, I bet :( This is so cute, so true and so funny. Just loved it!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/22/2023 7:30:00 PM

Thanks for the love on this one, Marikate. :)

John Lawless

Date: 8/22/2023 12:33:00 PM

the chop suey was probably older than the kid

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/22/2023 7:30:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. That eliminates one soft spot, I guess. lol.

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 8/22/2023 7:39:00 AM

An aquired taste my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/22/2023 7:29:00 PM

Oooh. Sharp comment, Vickey!!