Sara Kendrick Poet Jueju

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Writing a Jueju

Looked at Jueju form online  
Don't know if I'll have the time
Maybe I can write just one
Only four lines then I'm done  

Rain stopped, now creek swiftly flows
The wind got up, howling blows
Chill 'pon air uninviting
Now about it, I'm writing

I know, this is not correct
Syllables I should've checked
Maybe studied in detail
Don't run me off on a rail 

Gaze into deep, dark waters
How many share its quarters
Should I join them in deep cold
Never! I am not that bold 

Date Written: April 10, 2023
Contest: Write A Jueju-Qijue
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Used rhymezone.com while writing the lines
Checked with: HowManySyllable.com
Checked with: Grammar Checker on here

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Valsa George July 3, 2023 at 9:23 PM A very entertaining poem on writing a Jueju. Congratulations on your win dear Sara ! Sara Kendrick July 4, 2023 at 1:05 AM Valsa, thanks for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Emile Pinet May 22, 2023 at 11:11 AM Congratulations, Sara! Your entertaining poem “Writing A Jueju” earned you a distinguished place in my Jueju-Qijue contest; well done, my friend, Emile. Sara Kendrick May 22, 2023 at 1:13 PM Why, thank you, Emile for letting me know I placed in your contest. I appreciate you dropping by with the well done. Sara

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris May 1, 2023 at 2:44 AM You made it online and we are now reading a correct one. Welldone Sara. I like intro...and close. Sara Kendrick May 1, 2023 at 5:49 AM Why, thank you, Alfonso. I appreciate the visit and compliments. Sara

Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2023 at 3:11 PM Creative with a humorous side! Sara Kendrick April 16, 2023 at 4:00 AM I hope you got a chuckle out of it, Kim. Laughter is the best medicine. Sara

Paula Goldsmith April 13, 2023 at 11:45 AM A creative write/picture. You made it look like it is easy to write. I really enjoyed this one. Have a blessed day writing away.............. Sara Kendrick April 16, 2023 at 3:59 AM Why, thank you, Paula. At my age just waking up in the morning is a blessing. Sara

Phyllis Babcock April 11, 2023 at 7:12 PM One form I do not know but good luck in the contest. love phyl Sara Kendrick April 12, 2023 at 2:35 PM Why, thank you, Phyllis. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2023 at 3:27 AM - You did it, Sara ... a poem form I have never tried - Excellet poem - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs Sara Kendrick April 11, 2023 at 3:30 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate your visit. I think you should try this form. It is a little difficult, but you can do it since you do Haiku so well. Sara

Gershon Wolf April 10, 2023 at 7:54 PM Pretty darn terrific, I'd say! Lue Lu Sara Kendrick April 11, 2023 at 3:15 AM Thank you, Gershon. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Daniel Turner April 10, 2023 at 12:14 PM I know nothing of the form, Mrs Sara but I did stop to read. Sara Kendrick April 10, 2023 at 1:29 PM Thank you, Daniel for dropping by. I am glad that you did. Your comments are uplifting. Sara

Beryl Edmonds April 10, 2023 at 8:57 AM You did a wonderful Jeuju poem Sara, right on form. All the best… Belle Sara Kendrick April 10, 2023 at 1:25 PM Why, thank you, Belle. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara