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Writing a Jueju

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Looked at Jueju form online Don't know if I'll have the time Maybe I can write just one Only four lines then I'm done Rain stopped, now creek swiftly flows The wind got up, howling blows Chill 'pon air uninviting Now about it, I'm writing I know, this is not correct Syllables I should've checked Maybe studied in detail Don't run me off on a rail Gaze into deep, dark waters How many share its quarters Should I join them in deep cold Never! I am not that bold Date Written: April 10, 2023 Contest: Write A Jueju-Qijue Sponsor: Emile Pinet Used rhymezone.com while writing the lines Checked with: HowManySyllable.com Checked with: Grammar Checker on here

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Valsa George

Date: 7/3/2023 9:23:00 PM

A very entertaining poem on writing a Jueju. Congratulations on your win dear Sara !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/4/2023 1:05:00 AM

Valsa, thanks for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/22/2023 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations, Sara! Your entertaining poem “Writing A Jueju” earned you a distinguished place in my Jueju-Qijue contest; well done, my friend, Emile.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/22/2023 1:13:00 PM

Why, thank you, Emile for letting me know I placed in your contest. I appreciate you dropping by with the well done. Sara

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 5/1/2023 2:44:00 AM

You made it online and we are now reading a correct one. Welldone Sara. I like intro...and close.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2023 5:49:00 AM

Why, thank you, Alfonso. I appreciate the visit and compliments. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/13/2023 3:11:00 PM

Creative with a humorous side!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/16/2023 4:00:00 AM

I hope you got a chuckle out of it, Kim. Laughter is the best medicine. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/13/2023 11:45:00 AM

A creative write/picture. You made it look like it is easy to write. I really enjoyed this one. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/16/2023 3:59:00 AM

Why, thank you, Paula. At my age just waking up in the morning is a blessing. Sara

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/11/2023 7:12:00 PM

One form I do not know but good luck in the contest. love phyl

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2023 2:35:00 PM

Why, thank you, Phyllis. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2023 3:27:00 AM

- You did it, Sara ... a poem form I have never tried - Excellet poem - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/11/2023 3:30:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate your visit. I think you should try this form. It is a little difficult, but you can do it since you do Haiku so well. Sara