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Here I sit pen and paper in my hand Mind is like a tornado Many letters and words Date Written 3/25/2022 3 Place Note:How Many Syllables 10-7-6 4. writing Form K - Kimo - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Bill Baker

Date: 4/6/2022 8:01:00 AM

Congrats on the high finish, Paula. I like this form of poetry. I think I'll try to write a few Kimo poems. A good description of a poet sitting down to write. Hugs, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/6/2022 9:03:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day...............

Constance La France

Date: 4/1/2022 12:20:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my Kimo contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/2/2022 9:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have this fun win in your Kimo contest. I loved writing this one. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2022 3:31:00 PM

I remember this one and how much I liked it. Congrats, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/2/2022 9:25:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have this fun win. It is good to see you again. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day...............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/30/2022 12:41:00 PM

Paula, back with congratulations for your win! You have articulated such a true picture of the way a poem comes together. Blessings for you and your pen!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/2/2022 9:24:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have this fun win. It is good to see you back. Glad you like my picture/poem. My pen thanks you. Have a blessed day...............

Joseph May

Date: 3/29/2022 8:23:00 PM

Sometimes the words come quicker than the pen can write, Congrats on your win Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2022 8:02:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have this fun win. Yes, many times the words come faster than I can write. Mind and pen need to get together. Have a blessed day...............

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/29/2022 1:47:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one. Writing always relieves my stress so I understand this one completely. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2022 8:00:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you enjoyed this write. I also find writing relieves my stress. I also like to read what others write. Have a blessed day...............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/28/2022 7:27:00 PM

"Mind is like a tornado" - Wow! Wild comparison. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2022 9:00:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you like my fun tornado write. Have a blessed day...............

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2022 1:35:00 PM

I can relate to this tornado striking me! many congrats in your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2022 2:53:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulation. I was just getting ready to put the computer to bed when I saw your note. I did not know, I had this win. You made my day. "Thanks" It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you like this tornado fun write. Have a blessed day...............

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/27/2022 6:43:00 PM

Descriptive of how it is when too MANY words flood the mind! Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2022 10:06:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Oh yes, way toooooo many words at one time. Have a blessed day/week.............

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/27/2022 7:55:00 AM

You have said it aptly, Paula:) thank you for your comments on my poem, This jagged ragged pain, sometimes I have to go through pain, but not always, now I am feeling good, thank you for your prayers:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2022 10:02:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun/true write. So glad you are feeling good. I will keep you on my prayer list. Have a blessed day/week.............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/26/2022 8:57:00 PM

A 'tornado!' Wow. Mind is like a tomato: I squeeze hard, and there's yuk all over my hands. lol. Good one, Paula! :) gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2022 9:57:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Do I see a WOW??? Thanks, that made my day. Glad you like this write. Yes, mind/thoughts become a tornado when writing. You are a wonderful writer. Maybe you do not have a tornado whirling around. Have a blessed day/week.............

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/26/2022 10:12:00 AM

Love your perfect Kimo poem, Paula. deep thoughts in few words - "Mind is like a tornado" - so true for a poet. Hugs ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2022 9:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love this Kimo write. Yes, mind/thoughts become a tornado when writing. Have a blessed day/week...............

Jcb Brul

Date: 3/26/2022 2:37:00 AM

Simple yet glorious. Goodluck Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2022 8:29:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/25/2022 10:10:00 PM

No one can beat you in the power of simplicity, Paula! Good luck for the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2022 8:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like my power of simplicity write. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/25/2022 3:54:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this profound Kimo. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2022 8:26:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this Kimo write. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/25/2022 2:38:00 PM

fine writing Paula, indeed as we know we've been there hopefully to stay. Blessings, Gordon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2022 8:25:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my Writing. Yes, keep writing on. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/25/2022 1:35:00 PM

Delightful truth with all those words and letters spinning like an unstoppable whirlwind. All the best for the contest! Sending you blessings of calm my friend!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/25/2022 1:39:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad you like this true write. Have a great/blessed day.............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/25/2022 1:20:00 PM

I really like this one, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/25/2022 1:38:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day.............